rate ma barz

[safe manz]

boy u chat wet like ure swimming in a river

keep spitin line that u no u cant deliver

u no i spit truth so dont call me a fibber

lines so cold make ure whole body shivver

so boy betta go get ure jacket

y u lookin away isit coz u cant hack it

or is it coz i got talent n u no that u lack it

reppin m34 yes u no dat i bak it

u cant ever say im unknown

coz i got a big crew im never alone

n i only used one thing to get known

n it aint no wepon its a microphone

thers 10 year old boys carryin a nife

cuz thay fink is rite cuz thay got olda brovas

with nifes this shit ant rite

u dont wona giv yh family a frite u dont wona

get locked up or maybe evon stagged up

so give this shit it up u dont wont yh mum

cryin and depresd just give it up

and then evry1 will be destressed

this is y peaple walkin round with stabproof vests

tryin 2 resisting arrest yea this is the northwest

wee dont wont peaple getin stabbed in tha hart

diein of cardiac arrest so stop and we will all

be blessed and will will rest in peace

without no secret police

Edited October 29, 2009 by safe manz

[DudeAsInCool]

Not bad. You might want to add a chorus or a break