Another little quick rap off my head

[juggalo_ninja6648]

yo its whiteboy straight from chi-town/anybody talkin smack will get shot down/u a lil pup and im a bloodhound/im only 17 but most OG's and seen half tha shit i seen/i know the ropes so good i aint got much to learn/but i got plenty of bud and cash to burn/i got dat 9 on my waist/and im ready to kill u can tell by tha look on my face/open ur mouth and tell me how my dick taste/u faggot u runnin ur mouth but i aint gonna have it/everywhere i go i gotta be strapped/cause people want me dead and thats a true fact/but its all good im from da 773 and im always ready to bust out da heat/i dont write checks all i do is write ryhmes/i get so high i can almost touch the sky/dont believe me take a look at my bloodshot eyes/i cant believe i aint dead yet i must got 9 lives/when 5-0 stop me u know im tellin straight lies/im from the chi ya da southside/quick to kill a muthafucka and leave em layin facedown outside/im a straight thug whos always down to ride/im like my own personal hitman service/always pull the trigga never get scared or nervous/u say u got guns they probably squirt water/freestylin,gun drawin,or fist fightin u will get slaughtered/ya ur right i am white/but ill still shoot ya in ur windpipe/youll be drippin blood like a fuckin drainpipe/u can call me a bigshot wit all the dough i got/gettin money i jus cant stop/walk in da crib and see cash stacked all da way to da top/u run up in my crib u will get shot/nows theres blood on my floor i think ill call ur mom to come over and mop/and suck on my cock/have the bitch not wantin to stop/after i get off ill rip that bitches jewerly off and take it to tha pawn shop/jack the bitches whip and take it to tha chop shop/bangin on da street and the best on the beat/ya muthafucka u know dats me.

Edited April 11, 2008 by juggalo_ninja6648

[DudeAsInCool]

its better than the last one. i think you would get more responses, and it would be easier to read, if you broken up the run-on layout, and divided it into verses. if you do, i will give it a closer look