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  1. Hello there folks, im new to this side.

    well im an eager lyrics writer, and i fell over this site *fell as in i desperately searched google for a lyrics forum and found this*

    so... im here to post some lyrics and hope to get some feedback on them :D

    here goes, and there is a good bunch of em:

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    Broken soul

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    I can see it in your eyes

    the sorrow and the pain

    floating like butterflies

    your soul is beaten and slain

    it is not worth the trouble

    to say your opinion

    your mind is left in rubble

    and you are nothing but a minion

    (chorus)

    Oh my you are so pitifull

    your tears staining your cheek

    the world is not mercyfull

    blood in your face from the freak

    think about it one more time

    laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow

    all you do is whimper and whine

    don't cry, it will all end tomorrow

    You can feel the touch

    the burning sensation

    don't like to watch

    hand shiver in tension

    countless scars on your wrist

    your soul is in disorder

    in pain you tighten your fist

    your life getting shorter

    (Mid song special chorus)

    Broken soul

    broken soul

    broken soul

    why is the world so cruel?

    why is life not worth living?

    why is your soul so broken?

    why is your mind so dark?

    (chorus)

    Oh my you are so pitifull

    your tears staining your cheek

    the world is not mercyfull

    blood in your face from the freak

    think about it one more time

    laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow

    all you do is whimper and whine

    don't cry, it will all end tomorrow

    Sorrow

    pain

    broken soul

    why so sad my friend?

    dont you know where your soul went?

    its not with you anymore

    your mind is a crumbled core

    (chorus)

    Oh my you are so pitifull

    your tears staining your cheek

    the world is not mercyfull

    blood in your face from the freak

    think about it one more time

    laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow

    all you do is whimper and whine

    don't cry, it will all end tomorrow

    ..................................................

    Darkness life

    ----------------

    In these troubled times

    when i feel the darkness grab me

    I go to seek cover behind your shield

    hoping to repel the evil who wants me

    Because when i stray too far, i feel the loneliness

    and when i walk to far, I feel the emptyness

    I wander about aimlessly, in my own world

    a world filled with terror and dread

    no place to hide

    I see the people around me

    and I hear their voices loudly

    but even in the most crowded places

    the damned, scream out for me

    I don't need forgiveness

    I don't need help

    I don't need anyone around me

    in my world of the dead

    I can pray to my god

    I can blame so many others

    but in the end I realise

    it is I who messed it up

    I do need a goal in life

    I do need the friends of mine

    I do need anything to care for

    For i am not dead yet

    *silent whisper* "it was a nightmare, they came from the shadows, crawling on all four, i don't want these visions anymore

    i hope to one day, be able to see clearly, that life is a gift, to take and hold for eternity"

    Because as long as i live i won't give up

    as long as i breath i won't give up

    as long as i have something to do, my life goes on.

    .................................................................................

    Death is natural

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    Angels crying

    their screams pierce the sky

    you just keep on lying

    only wondering why

    are you afraid of something

    to not be accepted

    your mind is rotting

    your codes being decrypted

    (chorus)

    Hear the yelling of the lost life

    smell the pain of the forgotten wife

    feel their cold hearts beating no more

    so silent you hear the fainting of the core

    Yeah, life comes to an end

    yeah, the death has caught the scent

    yeah, the gatekeeper awaits

    yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths

    Energy flows

    the time is almost out

    cold chill kissing the nose

    no time to shout

    as your time has come soon

    what are you thinking?

    has it all been worth it?

    to never again see the rising moon

    (chorus)

    Hear the yelling of the lost life

    smell the pain of the forgotten wife

    feel their cold hearts beating no more

    so silent you hear the fainting of the core

    Yeah, life comes to an end

    yeah, the death has caught the scent

    yeah, the gatekeeper awaits

    yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths

    Lost everything

    your pride and your life

    you would do anything

    to make the dead body rise

    it is the law of nature

    survival of the fittest

    hes dead and there is no cure

    which so many will detest

    Oh no

    there is no way around

    oh no

    dead is a part of life

    oh no

    let it come late or come soon

    oh yes

    we are all going to die

    ....................................

    Evil mindness

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    Doubtfull servant

    to the abyss master

    feeling his wrath in his head

    screaming in pain for his mercy

    neglected again and again and again

    doubtfull servants cry for mercy

    never be see never to be heard

    whiplash slashing the back asunder

    blood flowing from the wounds of the mortal

    wicked mind laughing in satisfaction

    defragmentation of the brain

    rain pondering the roof

    hard hits in the face

    thought and emotions long gone

    nothing but madness is left now

    the feeling of the fist

    crushing skull and snapping bones

    die now die filthy scum

    blood drunk in wild eyes

    the fear of the holy

    unholy pleasure for the wicked creatures

    never mock the master

    of the vengeful claw

    tearing through organs

    tears staining the blood red carpet

    no forgiveness

    no mercy

    no sorrow in the struck

    pure anger rush for the unprepared

    ripping and slaughtering to lamb

    hacking and slashing the fool

    a cool breeze to cool the wounds

    deepfreeze the morale of the dead

    nothing is ready for this

    no one is prepared for you

    gates of hell opening my inner self

    the demon from the other side

    moving trough vengefull scent of regret

    now leave me be

    slay my foe for his will to be undone

    beasts of the nether hear my call

    .....................................................

    My love is eternal

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    Sitting on the beach all alone

    watching the sunset

    don't want to go home

    all i think about

    it makes me want to shout

    (chorus)

    a big black hole

    swirling in my chest

    only you can fill the hole

    all you have to do

    is give me your yes

    baby i want you by my side

    i want to step forth

    don't want to hide

    tell you how much i love you

    feel your body all night through

    (chorus)

    a big black hole

    swirling in my chest

    only you can fill the hole

    all you have to do

    is give me your yes

    You are my only one

    the only one i care for

    you are the ever shining sun

    and i will love you

    for evermore

    (chorus)x2

    a big black hole

    swirling in my chest

    only you can fill the hole

    all you have to do

    is give me your yes

    ..............................

    Sleeper

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    My cellphone is beebing

    but i am still sleeping

    i used it as alarm

    but my bed is so comfortably warm

    its six in the morning

    i stretch my body while yawning

    i wish i could sleep longer

    but i have been taken by the hunger

    (chorus)

    I hate the mornings

    but in a way i love them

    i have got several warnings

    if you say that, you may never wake up again

    just because i don't like to get up

    my alarm keeps beebing me

    hugging my pillow, i want it to stop

    please sunshine, go away and leave me be

    Wish it would stay dark forever

    the chance for a day without light is never

    i got the sunshine coming from my window

    please lord, why can't it just go?

    i prefer to sleep long

    but dont worry there is nothing wrong

    i just dont like the morning thats all

    turning around, facing the wall

    well my good people, i bid you goodnight

    before you leave please shut off the light

    i will sleep for the rest of the day

    and dont disturb me for else i will be mad okay?

    (chorus)

    I hate the mornings

    but in a way i love them

    i have got several warnings

    if you say that, you may never wake up again

    just because i don't like to get up

    my alarm keeps beebing me

    hugging my pillow, i want it to stop

    please sunshine, go away and leave me be

    ....................................................................

    What is life?

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    What is life?

    where does it go?

    what is the meaning?

    what is the goal?

    (Chorus)

    ohh yeah

    what is life?

    ohh tell me

    what is my path?

    ooh answer me

    what is destiny?

    ooh hear me

    what will i do?

    It all seemed so obvious

    life is a gift that we hold

    but im growing anxious

    why am i feeling so cold

    am i worrying too much?

    miss a light for me to touch

    really really i don't know where my life will go

    oh somebody, why am i feeling so low?

    Im not sure i have a goal

    im not sure i am alive

    my heart feels like an empty hole

    tell me, am i being naive?

    is there a destiny?

    if so, what is mine?

    could somebody just reach into my soul and let me see

    feels like a guideline

    Ahhh yeah

    somebody hear me

    please tell me

    and answer me

    what is life about?

    ahh hear me scream

    and hear me shout

    im feeling like and empty shell

    forgotten on the bottom of a dried out well

    (Chorus)x2

    ohh yeah

    what is life?

    ohh tell me

    what is my path?

    ooh answer me

    what is destiny?

    ooh hear me

    what will i do?

    Life seems so dark

    when you dont know your purpose

    give me a sign, give me a mark

    and my soul will be to your service

    so tell me, what am I?

    please answer me

    and do not dare to lie

    let go of my hand and let me be

    LET ME BE!

    LET ME SEE!

    LET ME LIVE!

    LET ME...

    find my long lost path

    ................................

    What we truely are

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    *howl*

    Awrooooooh

    *speaking*

    oh... look to the sky, do you see what i see?

    the fullmoon has arrived... that means...

    When the fullmoon is rising in the night

    im getting a feeling that i cannot fight

    i don't wish to either for it is good

    going to city hunting for food

    (chorus)

    I feel the changing

    i feel the changing

    my true face is this

    the moon has given me the kiss

    blessed me with wisdom and power

    when the time hits the 12th hour

    and the moon shines bright on the sky

    My paws pondering the ground

    some think im just a hound

    but they will know soon enough

    that hiding from me is kinda tough

    (chorus)

    I feel the changing

    i feel the changing

    my true face is this

    the moon has given me the kiss

    blessed me with wisdom and power

    when the time hits the 12th hour

    and the moon shines bright on the sky

    *howl*

    Awroooooooh

    *speaking*

    the changing has got the grip on me

    don't just stand there you fool

    you better run

    then you will maybe live a little longer

    *laugh*

    Too late, here i come

    (chorus)

    I feel the changing

    i feel the changing

    my true face is this

    the moon has given me the kiss

    blessed me with wisdom and power

    when the time hits the 12th hour

    and the moon shines bright on the sky

    I can taste the blood

    everywhere on the street like a flood

    im no longer human

    you try to do what nobody can

    Load the rifle take a good aim

    pitifull humans your guns are so lame

    Look in my eyes, what do you see?

    the wolf that i am have been set free

    *howl*

    Awrooooooooh

    (chorus)

    I feel the changing

    i feel the changing

    my true face is this

    the moon has given me the kiss

    blessed me with wisdom and power

    when the time hits the 12th hour

    and the moon shines bright on the sky

    *howl*

    Awroooooooooh

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    thats all of them :)

    any comments and critisism it appreciated, im striving to become a good lyrics writer, so anything will help me :)

    rock on!

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