Hello there folks, im new to this side.
well im an eager lyrics writer, and i fell over this site *fell as in i desperately searched google for a lyrics forum and found this*
so... im here to post some lyrics and hope to get some feedback on them :D
here goes, and there is a good bunch of em:
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Broken soul
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I can see it in your eyes
the sorrow and the pain
floating like butterflies
your soul is beaten and slain
it is not worth the trouble
to say your opinion
your mind is left in rubble
and you are nothing but a minion
(chorus)
Oh my you are so pitifull
your tears staining your cheek
the world is not mercyfull
blood in your face from the freak
think about it one more time
laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow
all you do is whimper and whine
don't cry, it will all end tomorrow
You can feel the touch
the burning sensation
don't like to watch
hand shiver in tension
countless scars on your wrist
your soul is in disorder
in pain you tighten your fist
your life getting shorter
(Mid song special chorus)
Broken soul
broken soul
broken soul
why is the world so cruel?
why is life not worth living?
why is your soul so broken?
why is your mind so dark?
(chorus)
Oh my you are so pitifull
your tears staining your cheek
the world is not mercyfull
blood in your face from the freak
think about it one more time
laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow
all you do is whimper and whine
don't cry, it will all end tomorrow
Sorrow
pain
broken soul
why so sad my friend?
dont you know where your soul went?
its not with you anymore
your mind is a crumbled core
(chorus)
Oh my you are so pitifull
your tears staining your cheek
the world is not mercyfull
blood in your face from the freak
think about it one more time
laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow
all you do is whimper and whine
don't cry, it will all end tomorrow
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Darkness life
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In these troubled times
when i feel the darkness grab me
I go to seek cover behind your shield
hoping to repel the evil who wants me
Because when i stray too far, i feel the loneliness
and when i walk to far, I feel the emptyness
I wander about aimlessly, in my own world
a world filled with terror and dread
no place to hide
I see the people around me
and I hear their voices loudly
but even in the most crowded places
the damned, scream out for me
I don't need forgiveness
I don't need help
I don't need anyone around me
in my world of the dead
I can pray to my god
I can blame so many others
but in the end I realise
it is I who messed it up
I do need a goal in life
I do need the friends of mine
I do need anything to care for
For i am not dead yet
*silent whisper* "it was a nightmare, they came from the shadows, crawling on all four, i don't want these visions anymore
i hope to one day, be able to see clearly, that life is a gift, to take and hold for eternity"
Because as long as i live i won't give up
as long as i breath i won't give up
as long as i have something to do, my life goes on.
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Death is natural
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Angels crying
their screams pierce the sky
you just keep on lying
only wondering why
are you afraid of something
to not be accepted
your mind is rotting
your codes being decrypted
(chorus)
Hear the yelling of the lost life
smell the pain of the forgotten wife
feel their cold hearts beating no more
so silent you hear the fainting of the core
Yeah, life comes to an end
yeah, the death has caught the scent
yeah, the gatekeeper awaits
yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths
Energy flows
the time is almost out
cold chill kissing the nose
no time to shout
as your time has come soon
what are you thinking?
has it all been worth it?
to never again see the rising moon
(chorus)
Hear the yelling of the lost life
smell the pain of the forgotten wife
feel their cold hearts beating no more
so silent you hear the fainting of the core
Yeah, life comes to an end
yeah, the death has caught the scent
yeah, the gatekeeper awaits
yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths
Lost everything
your pride and your life
you would do anything
to make the dead body rise
it is the law of nature
survival of the fittest
hes dead and there is no cure
which so many will detest
Oh no
there is no way around
oh no
dead is a part of life
oh no
let it come late or come soon
oh yes
we are all going to die
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Evil mindness
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Doubtfull servant
to the abyss master
feeling his wrath in his head
screaming in pain for his mercy
neglected again and again and again
doubtfull servants cry for mercy
never be see never to be heard
whiplash slashing the back asunder
blood flowing from the wounds of the mortal
wicked mind laughing in satisfaction
defragmentation of the brain
rain pondering the roof
hard hits in the face
thought and emotions long gone
nothing but madness is left now
the feeling of the fist
crushing skull and snapping bones
die now die filthy scum
blood drunk in wild eyes
the fear of the holy
unholy pleasure for the wicked creatures
never mock the master
of the vengeful claw
tearing through organs
tears staining the blood red carpet
no forgiveness
no mercy
no sorrow in the struck
pure anger rush for the unprepared
ripping and slaughtering to lamb
hacking and slashing the fool
a cool breeze to cool the wounds
deepfreeze the morale of the dead
nothing is ready for this
no one is prepared for you
gates of hell opening my inner self
the demon from the other side
moving trough vengefull scent of regret
now leave me be
slay my foe for his will to be undone
beasts of the nether hear my call
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My love is eternal
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Sitting on the beach all alone
watching the sunset
don't want to go home
all i think about
it makes me want to shout
(chorus)
a big black hole
swirling in my chest
only you can fill the hole
all you have to do
is give me your yes
baby i want you by my side
i want to step forth
don't want to hide
tell you how much i love you
feel your body all night through
(chorus)
a big black hole
swirling in my chest
only you can fill the hole
all you have to do
is give me your yes
You are my only one
the only one i care for
you are the ever shining sun
and i will love you
for evermore
(chorus)x2
a big black hole
swirling in my chest
only you can fill the hole
all you have to do
is give me your yes
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Sleeper
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My cellphone is beebing
but i am still sleeping
i used it as alarm
but my bed is so comfortably warm
its six in the morning
i stretch my body while yawning
i wish i could sleep longer
but i have been taken by the hunger
(chorus)
I hate the mornings
but in a way i love them
i have got several warnings
if you say that, you may never wake up again
just because i don't like to get up
my alarm keeps beebing me
hugging my pillow, i want it to stop
please sunshine, go away and leave me be
Wish it would stay dark forever
the chance for a day without light is never
i got the sunshine coming from my window
please lord, why can't it just go?
i prefer to sleep long
but dont worry there is nothing wrong
i just dont like the morning thats all
turning around, facing the wall
well my good people, i bid you goodnight
before you leave please shut off the light
i will sleep for the rest of the day
and dont disturb me for else i will be mad okay?
(chorus)
I hate the mornings
but in a way i love them
i have got several warnings
if you say that, you may never wake up again
just because i don't like to get up
my alarm keeps beebing me
hugging my pillow, i want it to stop
please sunshine, go away and leave me be
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What is life?
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What is life?
where does it go?
what is the meaning?
what is the goal?
(Chorus)
ohh yeah
what is life?
ohh tell me
what is my path?
ooh answer me
what is destiny?
ooh hear me
what will i do?
It all seemed so obvious
life is a gift that we hold
but im growing anxious
why am i feeling so cold
am i worrying too much?
miss a light for me to touch
really really i don't know where my life will go
oh somebody, why am i feeling so low?
Im not sure i have a goal
im not sure i am alive
my heart feels like an empty hole
tell me, am i being naive?
is there a destiny?
if so, what is mine?
could somebody just reach into my soul and let me see
feels like a guideline
Ahhh yeah
somebody hear me
please tell me
and answer me
what is life about?
ahh hear me scream
and hear me shout
im feeling like and empty shell
forgotten on the bottom of a dried out well
(Chorus)x2
ohh yeah
what is life?
ohh tell me
what is my path?
ooh answer me
what is destiny?
ooh hear me
what will i do?
Life seems so dark
when you dont know your purpose
give me a sign, give me a mark
and my soul will be to your service
so tell me, what am I?
please answer me
and do not dare to lie
let go of my hand and let me be
LET ME BE!
LET ME SEE!
LET ME LIVE!
LET ME...
find my long lost path
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What we truely are
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*howl*
Awrooooooh
*speaking*
oh... look to the sky, do you see what i see?
the fullmoon has arrived... that means...
When the fullmoon is rising in the night
im getting a feeling that i cannot fight
i don't wish to either for it is good
going to city hunting for food
(chorus)
I feel the changing
i feel the changing
my true face is this
the moon has given me the kiss
blessed me with wisdom and power
when the time hits the 12th hour
and the moon shines bright on the sky
My paws pondering the ground
some think im just a hound
but they will know soon enough
that hiding from me is kinda tough
(chorus)
I feel the changing
i feel the changing
my true face is this
the moon has given me the kiss
blessed me with wisdom and power
when the time hits the 12th hour
and the moon shines bright on the sky
*howl*
Awroooooooh
*speaking*
the changing has got the grip on me
don't just stand there you fool
you better run
then you will maybe live a little longer
*laugh*
Too late, here i come
(chorus)
I feel the changing
i feel the changing
my true face is this
the moon has given me the kiss
blessed me with wisdom and power
when the time hits the 12th hour
and the moon shines bright on the sky
I can taste the blood
everywhere on the street like a flood
im no longer human
you try to do what nobody can
Load the rifle take a good aim
pitifull humans your guns are so lame
Look in my eyes, what do you see?
the wolf that i am have been set free
*howl*
Awrooooooooh
(chorus)
I feel the changing
i feel the changing
my true face is this
the moon has given me the kiss
blessed me with wisdom and power
when the time hits the 12th hour
and the moon shines bright on the sky
*howl*
Awroooooooooh
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thats all of them :)
any comments and critisism it appreciated, im striving to become a good lyrics writer, so anything will help me :)
rock on!