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Silverhowl

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  1. Thanks dude :) well, im not really good at that, write a bit, leave it and then come back later, i write when im in my creative mood, which happens from time to time, and then i write a whole song :D
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Hello there folks, im new to this side. well im an eager lyrics writer, and i fell over this site *fell as in i desperately searched google for a lyrics forum and found this* so... im here to post some lyrics and hope to get some feedback on them :D here goes, and there is a good bunch of em: -- -------------------------------------------------------- Broken soul ------------ I can see it in your eyes the sorrow and the pain floating like butterflies your soul is beaten and slain it is not worth the trouble to say your opinion your mind is left in rubble and you are nothing but a minion (chorus) Oh my you are so pitifull your tears staining your cheek the world is not mercyfull blood in your face from the freak think about it one more time laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow all you do is whimper and whine don't cry, it will all end tomorrow You can feel the touch the burning sensation don't like to watch hand shiver in tension countless scars on your wrist your soul is in disorder in pain you tighten your fist your life getting shorter (Mid song special chorus) Broken soul broken soul broken soul why is the world so cruel? why is life not worth living? why is your soul so broken? why is your mind so dark? (chorus) Oh my you are so pitifull your tears staining your cheek the world is not mercyfull blood in your face from the freak think about it one more time laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow all you do is whimper and whine don't cry, it will all end tomorrow Sorrow pain broken soul why so sad my friend? dont you know where your soul went? its not with you anymore your mind is a crumbled core (chorus) Oh my you are so pitifull your tears staining your cheek the world is not mercyfull blood in your face from the freak think about it one more time laying in the dirt soaked in sorrow all you do is whimper and whine don't cry, it will all end tomorrow .................................................. Darkness life ---------------- In these troubled times when i feel the darkness grab me I go to seek cover behind your shield hoping to repel the evil who wants me Because when i stray too far, i feel the loneliness and when i walk to far, I feel the emptyness I wander about aimlessly, in my own world a world filled with terror and dread no place to hide I see the people around me and I hear their voices loudly but even in the most crowded places the damned, scream out for me I don't need forgiveness I don't need help I don't need anyone around me in my world of the dead I can pray to my god I can blame so many others but in the end I realise it is I who messed it up I do need a goal in life I do need the friends of mine I do need anything to care for For i am not dead yet *silent whisper* "it was a nightmare, they came from the shadows, crawling on all four, i don't want these visions anymore i hope to one day, be able to see clearly, that life is a gift, to take and hold for eternity" Because as long as i live i won't give up as long as i breath i won't give up as long as i have something to do, my life goes on. ................................................................................. Death is natural -------------------- Angels crying their screams pierce the sky you just keep on lying only wondering why are you afraid of something to not be accepted your mind is rotting your codes being decrypted (chorus) Hear the yelling of the lost life smell the pain of the forgotten wife feel their cold hearts beating no more so silent you hear the fainting of the core Yeah, life comes to an end yeah, the death has caught the scent yeah, the gatekeeper awaits yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths Energy flows the time is almost out cold chill kissing the nose no time to shout as your time has come soon what are you thinking? has it all been worth it? to never again see the rising moon (chorus) Hear the yelling of the lost life smell the pain of the forgotten wife feel their cold hearts beating no more so silent you hear the fainting of the core Yeah, life comes to an end yeah, the death has caught the scent yeah, the gatekeeper awaits yeah, you met by ghosts and wraiths Lost everything your pride and your life you would do anything to make the dead body rise it is the law of nature survival of the fittest hes dead and there is no cure which so many will detest Oh no there is no way around oh no dead is a part of life oh no let it come late or come soon oh yes we are all going to die .................................... Evil mindness -------------- Doubtfull servant to the abyss master feeling his wrath in his head screaming in pain for his mercy neglected again and again and again doubtfull servants cry for mercy never be see never to be heard whiplash slashing the back asunder blood flowing from the wounds of the mortal wicked mind laughing in satisfaction defragmentation of the brain rain pondering the roof hard hits in the face thought and emotions long gone nothing but madness is left now the feeling of the fist crushing skull and snapping bones die now die filthy scum blood drunk in wild eyes the fear of the holy unholy pleasure for the wicked creatures never mock the master of the vengeful claw tearing through organs tears staining the blood red carpet no forgiveness no mercy no sorrow in the struck pure anger rush for the unprepared ripping and slaughtering to lamb hacking and slashing the fool a cool breeze to cool the wounds deepfreeze the morale of the dead nothing is ready for this no one is prepared for you gates of hell opening my inner self the demon from the other side moving trough vengefull scent of regret now leave me be slay my foe for his will to be undone beasts of the nether hear my call ..................................................... My love is eternal ----------------------- Sitting on the beach all alone watching the sunset don't want to go home all i think about it makes me want to shout (chorus) a big black hole swirling in my chest only you can fill the hole all you have to do is give me your yes baby i want you by my side i want to step forth don't want to hide tell you how much i love you feel your body all night through (chorus) a big black hole swirling in my chest only you can fill the hole all you have to do is give me your yes You are my only one the only one i care for you are the ever shining sun and i will love you for evermore (chorus)x2 a big black hole swirling in my chest only you can fill the hole all you have to do is give me your yes .............................. Sleeper ---------- My cellphone is beebing but i am still sleeping i used it as alarm but my bed is so comfortably warm its six in the morning i stretch my body while yawning i wish i could sleep longer but i have been taken by the hunger (chorus) I hate the mornings but in a way i love them i have got several warnings if you say that, you may never wake up again just because i don't like to get up my alarm keeps beebing me hugging my pillow, i want it to stop please sunshine, go away and leave me be Wish it would stay dark forever the chance for a day without light is never i got the sunshine coming from my window please lord, why can't it just go? i prefer to sleep long but dont worry there is nothing wrong i just dont like the morning thats all turning around, facing the wall well my good people, i bid you goodnight before you leave please shut off the light i will sleep for the rest of the day and dont disturb me for else i will be mad okay? (chorus) I hate the mornings but in a way i love them i have got several warnings if you say that, you may never wake up again just because i don't like to get up my alarm keeps beebing me hugging my pillow, i want it to stop please sunshine, go away and leave me be .................................................................... What is life? --------------- What is life? where does it go? what is the meaning? what is the goal? (Chorus) ohh yeah what is life? ohh tell me what is my path? ooh answer me what is destiny? ooh hear me what will i do? It all seemed so obvious life is a gift that we hold but im growing anxious why am i feeling so cold am i worrying too much? miss a light for me to touch really really i don't know where my life will go oh somebody, why am i feeling so low? Im not sure i have a goal im not sure i am alive my heart feels like an empty hole tell me, am i being naive? is there a destiny? if so, what is mine? could somebody just reach into my soul and let me see feels like a guideline Ahhh yeah somebody hear me please tell me and answer me what is life about? ahh hear me scream and hear me shout im feeling like and empty shell forgotten on the bottom of a dried out well (Chorus)x2 ohh yeah what is life? ohh tell me what is my path? ooh answer me what is destiny? ooh hear me what will i do? Life seems so dark when you dont know your purpose give me a sign, give me a mark and my soul will be to your service so tell me, what am I? please answer me and do not dare to lie let go of my hand and let me be LET ME BE! LET ME SEE! LET ME LIVE! LET ME... find my long lost path ................................ What we truely are ------------------ *howl* Awrooooooh *speaking* oh... look to the sky, do you see what i see? the fullmoon has arrived... that means... When the fullmoon is rising in the night im getting a feeling that i cannot fight i don't wish to either for it is good going to city hunting for food (chorus) I feel the changing i feel the changing my true face is this the moon has given me the kiss blessed me with wisdom and power when the time hits the 12th hour and the moon shines bright on the sky My paws pondering the ground some think im just a hound but they will know soon enough that hiding from me is kinda tough (chorus) I feel the changing i feel the changing my true face is this the moon has given me the kiss blessed me with wisdom and power when the time hits the 12th hour and the moon shines bright on the sky *howl* Awroooooooh *speaking* the changing has got the grip on me don't just stand there you fool you better run then you will maybe live a little longer *laugh* Too late, here i come (chorus) I feel the changing i feel the changing my true face is this the moon has given me the kiss blessed me with wisdom and power when the time hits the 12th hour and the moon shines bright on the sky I can taste the blood everywhere on the street like a flood im no longer human you try to do what nobody can Load the rifle take a good aim pitifull humans your guns are so lame Look in my eyes, what do you see? the wolf that i am have been set free *howl* Awrooooooooh (chorus) I feel the changing i feel the changing my true face is this the moon has given me the kiss blessed me with wisdom and power when the time hits the 12th hour and the moon shines bright on the sky *howl* Awroooooooooh .......................... thats all of them :) any comments and critisism it appreciated, im striving to become a good lyrics writer, so anything will help me :) rock on!
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