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aight looks lyk i win lol

if you mods close threads like wen they get old then close it up...

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yeh come on man thats just plain weird lol atleast ya could say tie or sumthin or just explain a bitt more and give a FULL vote to one of us??

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aight cool its 1-1 its on now lol

uppin for more votes

[eminems new cd]

tru Excrement_Cranium hopefully its a god album thats all im hoping for coz in my opinion his time is up as a rapper its time to move ova and let sumone else in the spotlight...

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cool 1-0 uppin for more votes its between me and shawn since he was the 1st to accept...

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Thanks man...

But we didn't start the fire...

what you mean "we didnt start the fire"

every1 go to rate my rhymes and rate it outta 10 plz wanna know wot you all lthink??

[best 5 rappers]

also id lyk to add a OLD SKOOL rapper Mc Hammer and coolio they were madd Mc hammer for "cant touch this" and coolio for "gangsters Paradise" they were sum old skoll shit...

[1 Gangsta who Cared...]

1 Gangsta that cared

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You Had thrown away your life

just coz sum fasggot got u in alot of strife

ya evan cuted ya wrists to take away the pain

and if ya asked me that is pretty fukin lame

i told you once and ill tell u again

you were neva the 1 to blame he's the 1 who

raped you not the otha was around

now he's 6feet underground and now u settled down

n now u shitty with me coz i wldnt give this chicks phone numba

cause i wnted to protect you,im not tryin to protect her..

but her and her freinds r not to be fucked with..

so plz plz dont go startin shit

coz u'll prob end up in an abandond gravel pit

woth ya frickon throat slit.

I Dnt wanna go bak to that Gangsta shit

dnt wanna go back to carryin knifes on my fuckin hip

and bustin ppl's lips, they say sumthin to me n id flip

with my crew behind me i was makin wannabe's

hearts skip..

dnt wanna go bak jsut coz ya cldnt keep ya mouth shut

U kno shit hit the fan so FAST there was no way u

were guna LAST..

and now ur dead and

i sit here and dred

that ima guna lose my gurl cause i promised

that id neva go bak but now i gotta to take away the pain

to get my revenge to make sure they neva reafend

i'm beggin you dnt stat shit best i can do

is SAY U DNT HAVE A CLUE

wrote this awhile bak bout my friend but now she wanna kill

me coz of sum fucked up shit so yeh

wrote another 1 called "stabbed in the heart"

post it up in the nxt couple of days

peace to ya all

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cum on sum one on here has gotta rap part from me...

[best 5 rappers]

who do you think are the beast 5 rappers in history

1.biggie smalls(of course)

2.tupac(of course)

3.eminem

4.dre

5.snoop dogg

50 cent is gay as hell so is nelly and alot of otha wannabe fags

but hey ya get that so hwo do y'all think/?

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hey any1 else want a shot??

cum on wanna get this sub forum goin wiht this...

[eminems new cd]

sorry it is called curtain call i got it mixed up

and to shawn sum of the songs were ok but most of it was crap...

lyk with eminem show its was a solid album lyk i liked 98% oof the songs on it there was a couple that were crap...

[eminems new cd]

dont know if its already on here if it is sorry

and also dnt know who knows but eminems new cd cumin out is "curtains up"

it will prob be shit coz his otha one "encore" was pretty shit..

also he stuffed up on the one he made loyal to the game (2pac one)...

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yo yo this is my flow/

yeh im always on the go/

im always ready to put on a show/

so ya betta not stand in my way//

cause this shit right here ima bout to spray//

yeh,im guna spray my shit in ya face/

comin at you so hard it feels lyk you got hitt by cops mace/

man your a fuckin disgrace.../

cause you dnt belong in this rap game//

coz you neva guna get the fame//

coz ur ryhmes are not even dope/

man i heard betta shit from a fuckin pope/

see im the spawn of the devil//

y ur the spawn of sum fag named nevil//

yeh, see wen all this shit is sed and done/

this battle i have already won/

cause i just blew you away with my AK Gun/

see i bringing my 2 gats to this fight//

"BANG" from my left "BANG" from my right//

now bitch...ya seein heavens light//

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aight there you go as i sed a quick freestyle...

ill admitt sum of the lines were pre writt from sum of my otha rhymes

in my books coz i have lyk heaps of books with rhymes and shit in them

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nah i dnt care if ya wnt ill post sumthin up now it is guna be a freestyle it would be uppin you so no offence or anything...

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is that from a song?? if so that aint ya own work and that aint a freestyle....

neva uless when you "battle you up the otha person etc etc... so if ya wnt try again... make a new thread if you wnt... i dnt mind then il post mine up

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yeh txt man...

aight how we guna do this we both spitt a ryhme then otha ppl vote who won??

if that is right then it will be 5votes to win

3-0 ko if ya want and who's goin 1st?? you or me mite not be able to spitt right now mite lata on im at skool and its almost time to go home

so i prob will 2nite or 2morro at the latest

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open call out to all you suckas who wanna battle??