I composed a song, here are the lyrics. Please give an honest opinion about it.
The sound/style is kinda like a vertical horizon/nine days track, the message is for the guys that are way to shy in asking a girl they've been overwhelmed on, and that they should not waste time...
Title: Flower wilts
[drums and piano]
Just… Don’t…
forget it…
Master of everything bashfull
Just… don’t…
forget it...
Doesn't it suck that she can't stand next to you?
…
[/drums and piano]
[guitar only]
D, G, A, D,
[/guitar only]
[whole band]
Those dying roses in the corner, for who is it reserved?
Are you scared of her?
While you are waiting
Time is wasting?/
Too much letters, say the words/
before some one takes what you deserve?/
[pause]
[Piano and drums]
...
...
She’ll… never… Know…/
She’ll never guess the idea if you don’t show/
How will you prove that you're the perfect match/
what's the use of filling your head with questions
why don't you answer them all and give it a rest/
..
..
[Guitar and drums only]
D G A D
...
...
[WHOLE BAND]
Those dying roses in the corner for who was it reserved?
are you scared of her/
Time is wasting/
from your hesitating/
No letter, No call?
Fine let those guys steal what you deserve?/
No write… No talk…
[slow drums only ]
You’re. not. the. Only. guy…
You're. loosing. her. to. those. guy's?
[/slow dums only]
[come back]
You just lost her...(3x)
[stop]
... and she liked you allot.