cisco

It's more of a warning i guess... i can't give a sample of how it sounds due to the lack of equipment.

I composed a song, here are the lyrics. Please give an honest opinion about it. The sound/style is kinda like a vertical horizon/nine days track, the message is for the guys that are way to shy in asking a girl they've been overwhelmed on, and that they should not waste time... Title: Flower wilts [drums and piano] Just… Don’t… forget it… Master of everything bashfull Just… don’t… forget it... Doesn't it suck that she can't stand next to you? … [/drums and piano] [guitar only] D, G, A, D, [/guitar only] [whole band] Those dying roses in the corner, for who is it reserved? Are you scared of her? While you are waiting Time is wasting?/ Too much letters, say the words/ before some one takes what you deserve?/ [pause] [Piano and drums] ... ... She’ll… never… Know…/ She’ll never guess the idea if you don’t show/ How will you prove that you're the perfect match/ what's the use of filling your head with questions why don't you answer them all and give it a rest/ .. .. [Guitar and drums only] D G A D ... ... [WHOLE BAND] Those dying roses in the corner for who was it reserved? are you scared of her/ Time is wasting/ from your hesitating/ No letter, No call? Fine let those guys steal what you deserve?/ No write… No talk… [slow drums only ] You’re. not. the. Only. guy… You're. loosing. her. to. those. guy's? [/slow dums only] [come back] You just lost her...(3x) [stop] ... and she liked you allot.