ChopperX

Ok thanks, I'll add a few more lines to it. How about the changes I made to the second couplet? Is it better this way? Just you and me, that’s the way it should be We should be together, won’t you agree? Life’s to short to hide feelings So now I’m letting them out: You give me hope, you make me feel strong, You give me the strength to continue when everything goes wrong And when I think of you, everything’s alright I just have to ask:

I don't know if it's any good, but this is my third song. Please tell me what you think of it and if/what should be changed. Since the day I first met you I already knew, that I was going to love you When you’re not around, there’s a hole in my heart I just don’t want us to be apart I want to tell you how much I care for you, how much I love you My love for you is true like one and one is two There’s only one thing keeping me from asking.. It’s the fact that you might say no Though my feelings for you are stronger, so here I go: So, would you be my girlfriend? I’d never leave your side I’d comfort you whenever you cried I love you, whether it’s wrong or right My feelings for you will never change I hope that I’m not putting you in derange I love you, I’ll always do, I’ll never be untrue to you Life’s to short to hide feelings So now I’m letting them out: You give me hope, you make me feel strong, you give me the strength to continue when everything goes wrong And when I think of you, everything’s alright I just have to ask: Would you be my girlfriend? I’d never leave your side I’d comfort you whenever you cried I love you, whether it’s wrong or right My feelings for you will never change I hope that I’m not putting you in derange I love you.. I’ll always do.. I’ll never be untrue to you..

Ok, thank you very much to everyone for the help :]

Last question: Are there artists with this type of voice that have non-jazz / swing or anything related kind of songs except for Tom Jones? Most of the songs I downloaded from the artists mentioned in this thread is the jazz type of music and since I'm not really a jazz singer.. :p

Ok, thanks Method77, I think that I've got enough names now :]

Thanks Shawn, I'll try to get some songs of them :] But aren't there some uhm.. younger songs / artists like it?

Yes, I can't really explain it well But I mean the singing style, like the low voice etc. You know?

Hi, since I think that you all have much more music knowledge and know way more songs than I do, could someone please tell me the names of songs that are like (The singing of): Crazy Little Thing Called Love from Michael Bublé? Help would be greatly appreciated. Many thanks in advance, Chopper

Yes it did help, thank you very much again :] Oh, and I still couldn't think the 3 sentences to end the My love for you is like.. with. I only have one so far, is it any good? : My love for you is like the surging sea, wild and passionate against the sand Someone told me this one, but isn't this one used pretty much?

I tried to push my feelings aside But that didn’t felt right.. I just wanted to say that I love you.. Do you love me too? That’s the question I’d want to ask.. But this seems to be a difficult task.. From the very start, I loved you with all my heart.. If I’d give you my world, would you be my girl? To me you’re like a pearl My heart stops beating but my life goes on I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone Baby can’t you see I love you so? I never want to let you go.. If you could only see things through my view, You’d know that I’ll keep loving you… You’re the greatest girl I’ve ever known I want to have you for my own And whenever you’re close to me.. I want those moments to last forever And I’ll guarantee That I’ll never threat you bad, never.. I’d go trough fire for you, Fight for you, I’d do everything to make my love shine through (Maybe this line is better? : I’d do everything to show my love to you) Every time I see you.. My heart stops beating but my life goes on I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone Baby can’t you see I love you so? I never want to let you go.. If you could only see things through my view, You’d know that I’ll keep loving you… I told you once, I told you twice But being with you feels so nice Now I have to get something off my chest I’ll do my best: My love for you.. My love for you is like My love for you is like My love for you is like My love for you will last forever.. My heart stops beating but my life goes on I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone Baby can’t you see I love you so? I never want to let you go.. If you could only see things through my view, You’d know that I’ll keep loving you… My heart stops beating but my life goes on I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone Baby can’t you see I love you so? I never want to let you go.. If you could only see things through my view, You’d know that I’ll keep loving you… I will keep loving you.. For forever and ever.. Forever and ever.. Forever.. Ever.. ------------------------------------ As you might have noticed, the -> My love for you is like (3 times)<- sentences are not finished.. I couldn't think of anything to use, so I wanted to ask if someone could help me with this? Many thanks in advance! Also, rates please? ^^ Edit: Uhm.. Should I change the 3rd couplet (From -I told you once- till -My love for you will last forever-) or just get rid of the whole thing?

Thanks! I think I'm going to use that :) Anyway, what would you rate my song? ^^

I loved you once, I love you still, I always have, I always will.. That’s what I first thought, when I met you Soon that did change Though nobody knew Our love lasted long We had much fun But then it went wrong You started to talk about only one subject: You, you, you When you start talking I’d rather have the flu You, you, you You tell me everything you do, like you have to You, you, you We are through At the start I thought that you’d come round But you kept bossing me around And then I thought: Who do you think you are Telling me what to do like you’re some kind of superstar This is how it end You might comprehend Now I’m astray And I think I’m right when I say: You, you, you When you start talking I’d rather have the flu You, you, you You tell me everything you do You, you, you We are through! We are through... We are through... I loved you once, you did fulfill , now you don’t and never will -- --------------------------- I'm not quite sure about the comprehend part. If you think it's bad, could you please give me some advice? ^^ Thanks.