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Shawn

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  1. Sunday somebody stole my car.

    It had been sitting for a month and a half... plated, but not in running condition. I never noticed it was missing until Tuesday.

    Tonight, my coworker spotted the car and let me know so I could call the RCMP.

    It's now sitting outside my house. The guy they have in the cell fixed it while he had it.

    It's a strange world.

  2. He's not liable to be banned for it, because we ban very few.

    His posts, if more come, will be examined by everyone who reads them now on though. In essence it wouldn't matter if he started posting truly excellent stuff because nobody would believe he didn't lift it from someone else.

    The only point to the lyric battles here is respect from one's fellows. How much does he hold presently?

  3. i have been partying hard this weekend thats why i havent replied sooner,

    i am 100 percent sure that those bars arnt urs or were written by some else for u, the reason i am sure is everything uve layed so far has been farely poor in my opinion, the contents been rubbish and the style is poor, u ryhme in a style i call 1 line rhyme .where u ryhme at the end of the sentance and thats it, my favourite style is 2 ryhme line where u ryhme twice in the middle and at the end, now if u were at a stage in ur writing where u had the ability to use the 2 line rhyme style u wouldnt switch to the shitter more amauter style, this isnt a snap decission i have gone through all ur bars with a fine tooth combe,

    in terms of everything previous uv writ ide rate u 2 out of ten. and the last spit was a 7 out of ten, the writing style and the content is way diffrent too, i am sure that peice is not urs, although i could still out write and destroy those bars, i think uv cheated and should be dissqualified, theres no way u can go from shit too being okay, just like that and the diffrence between how weak everything u normaly do is to how that last piece was makes me sure u didnt write it,

    cough

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  4. Jesus is my name...its pronounced Hey-Soos for those who dont know..

    I figured that by the second time you used it in the piece. I had more fun imagining it used the other way the first time I saw it.

    Sort of a second-coming reference.

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