mezza69
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I think the rhythm is good and the central message is clear and honest, but it maybe lacks a bit of excitement.
allways like a reply good or bad it helps alot,but sadly im not an exciting person,how would you suggest to make it more exciting i would like to here im allways open for ideas.
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My suggestion would be to print out some lyrics from some of your favorite artists. Study how they structure their lyrics - model and replicate.
cool cool,good idea me thinks cheers for the advice it will help.
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I hate english mc's that americanise there bars
talk about hoes but never had there hand up a bra
why would you spit about a place you've never even seen
except in the comfort of your home on...........on the tv
i try and keep it real from the gu3
where shootings are rarely heard of/or known to be
it proberly will be one day but its not hear now
so you won't hear it from me when i spit my bars out
im not saying its all mc's but i have my doubts
they need to see whats real and get there heads out the ground
of coarse theres addicts hidden ere on crack and brown
but you rarely see them walking around guildford town
the g.u does have its bad places
but when i walk through them all i see is mates faces
so all im sayiing is spit whats true to you
coz you might not get caught out now,but you will do soon..........
ive got some mates who spit about guns and shootings in there lyrics,im not saying it doesnt happen or that people dont experience this,just saying that if you spit whats true to you you will go further.so if this is the life you lead then spit it,just thought i would clear this up coz it ain't like that round ere.
im new to this be honest.brutally honest lol
in Rate My Rhymes
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thankyou for your reply its allways welcomed,could you explain yourself tho im not understanding wot your getting at so please tell me.