[my first bars]

a few more for ya

i jus stepped in da game/but i aint got a claim to fame/

so ya wont no ma name /but ma bars will rain

till ya feel tha pain/runnin through ya vains/and ya going insaine...

just a quick free style for ya tell us wt ya fink

[my first bars]

cheers man ill get some more up onn ear soon u got any up on ear??

[Rate these plz]

yh yh like em mate like the first set more but ova all for your first try good man

[my first bars]

yo...yo... ma bars are so tight and tidy/you fink ya an mc but ya not even grimey

next year ill be bigga dan wiley/you wanna clash me its not lightly

im one of a kind there will be no1 like me/im new to da scene but im merkin ya team

while im puffin da green/my bars are dirty not clean/

i berst into da scene like im fukin da queen.

gimmi some feed back dont cuss me up to bad its ma first go at this peice out