[glad to be still alive]

Yea sumthin like dat happened me a while ago, dats makes me think...

"The say when u die ur whole life flashes before your eyes... Better fuckin make it worth watching"

[Rookie Rhymes]

True story dis happened last nite, Im irish tho ill jus tell u sum slang u midn get... da "guards" r da irish cops , "bens" is short for benson & hedges (cigarettes), and a fag is a cigarette

I know rhymes arent gud if u av 2 explain dem but i was told 2 jus use real words i use in real life n not try and sound british r american...

let me tell u a lil story bout last nite

Friend asked 2 meet 4 a smoke so i said yea mite

go out ava fag n calm some nerves

No threat der so i didn really care

till da guards wer around and began 2 chase us

werent doin nuthin rong jus ran in case cus

ive got a bit of a reputatation of doin stuff wrong

but its give the ammunition 2 start ritin these songs

so we jumped a wall and hid in a tree

friend looked at me and said wat cn u see?

seen da car cumin close 2 me so we hopped a fence

didn do nuthin rong jus wanted my bens

This wasn in da script dis wasn a plan

he said he coudin think of wat to do i said i can

So hid in in sum1 garden behind der shed

wtf am i doin i shud b b tugged up all kind in bed

Us sneakin around whisperin and creepin

4:00 in da morn i shud b at home sleepin

eventually we managed 2 sneak home

i was rappin "bad boy for life" sang by sean combs

I dont regret it im happy i did it

Life gives me lyrics n i jus spit it!

dats da story bout da 3rd of january

Ill b carefull more nw Ill b more wary!

fell free to critiscise but i didn start rappin untill 3 days ago so tips would be cool ,thanks

[Rookie Rhymes]

IM definitly happy wit 7

[Rookie Rhymes]

MY Rhymes r not slow my rhymes r not dull

Im rising quicker dan da price of petrol

furtado was promisicuios but im fukin viscious

wont b long 2 am fukin RnB bitches

I rap for fun not 4 the fame

Rappers these days there all da same

sayin their ghetto sayin their hood

Well i say nethier n guess wat? i dont wish i cud

Im jus egar im jus in da mood

im jus bein myself lyk i really shud

Rappin 2 diss bout der bro n der sis

better not choke tho thats a real miss

The mic is mine now runnin outa time now

Stop bein kind now sun stoppin 2 shine now

Bet ur luvin dis sound now!

I dont mind critiscism but can it b constructive critiscism

Im a rookie lol