my turn

[Windy City]

i been sittin here waitin for ya, waitin for my own chance
so i have to grip this opportunity in life and take charge like a grown man
So many artists tryna be heard but they produce bologna-my advice is GO HAM!
Dont be afraid to go against the industry-i made kin to it like its my broham
So go man! Be somebody, the world is yours!
Take the stones that were thrown at you, crack windows and open doors
Pay attention and listen to lifes secrets like u told em yours
Cause they steer you away from the creases in lifes totem poles
Man i told them hoes. Put all your money in my hand like you stole them hoes
And get back to the kitchen after your done foldin clothes
Na im jus kiddin, a nigga gettin off topic
And I jus keep spittin till you yell nigga get off! Stop it!
Your gettin kinda sexist..Bitch ill show you what sex is
Once i run through you ill make a new meaning of reckless
throw both of your legs around my neck like a necklace
And wake up fckn hungry yellin bitch whats for breakfast?!

[messenger]

its okay. theres sections that work well and sections that dont seem to fit. good overall, keep at it bud.