my first attempt at rhyming

[lask]

Now every conversation leads to complications
and I just ain't got the patience
to be dealing with all this feeling shit
and all this drama tearing us to bits
the complications if this situation
well it bites me in the ass like an Alsation
all the fightin and the wars, I cant take it any more
I cant even remember what the fuck we fightin for

Now in your eyes where your soul hides
I used to see sunshine all of the time
but now there always grey
just like a rainy day
I try to speak but I cant convey how I feel
its like we're spinnin round on a Ferris wheel
this has gotten to be so unreal
this ordeal is far from ideal
but girl you know you're my Achilles heel

Your venomous words how they sting
how they hurt when they pierce the skin
cut so deep and leave the poison within
where it burns for days your words replayed
weighs heavy on my shoulder blades
and now I find that my mind is warped with doubt
don't even know what the fuck this shits all about
I'm so sick of trying to please you
though I love you think I need to
get up get out and leave you

[messenger]

very good for a first attempt at rhyming buddy, works well, keep going, if we can get a few writers involved i wanna start up the battling section again. if your interested.