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Sittin in the projects, spittin quick and countin them contacts, tears in your eyes cuz you droped from a set , blood and sweat not a drop of regret, made it through the killing feilds ,won the bet, they treat you like a threat when they see the bulge of the berretta , tangled all your foes in the fabric of your sweata just to keep you warm in the worst kinda weather , keep it marchin through the strom no heart left to mourn , blizzird coming while the wizard is humming ... ugh froze up, fuck that oil, Ill still light your ass up like a tesla coil , feet in the concrete but the spoils for the royals , no defeat like a knight at the gate one spot the mate, crack that shit open like a cheap date , body movin soldier grovin no disputin toughter to kill then rasputin , fuck the rootin tootin this kids in it for the shootin.....Straw boss at the door got the crow spittin "open floor" dont give a shit bout who they shoot or whos beats they pollute , musta flipped the weitch on the insinorator chute, Im no hater backing up beep beep roll back the clocks, reverse when we didnt have to rehearse- spittin came easy and flowed so greasy most of it was cheesy but so goes a freebee . CANT SEE IN THE SHADOW WHEN YOUR STANDING IN THE LIGHT , FIRST LESSON LEARNED ON THE VERY FIRST NIGHT. Didnt know up from down or left from right knowing wrong meant to be strong so we stayed on like where pissin in your crys , message in a bottle- sign it like the lotto - gas mixin like gellato - stamp it witha match- screamin go deep and catch- nect batchll leave um scratchin for a reed , how many straw brain cats I gatta feed .... Like a lion in the zoo been prayin on you , call it eyein but stay on d-fence fuck the pretence we gone. string this bitch up a pinyatta from her thong , spin it like a glob tratta , take a crack at it , ya allmost had it silly faggot , pick up sticks , tricks dont know me thats tragic, got the gris gris for the he she's , black magic- Fantastic got me flickin a bic competin with a match stick - fired up like a 2 tire truck - going no where - loose hair - beware - flossin - my style aint talkin- real sky larkin-no parkin - move on - guess where just to strong - bitch I got no pride left to steal but still get laid coppin a happy meal
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Leave it to a group of women to attempt to create a new art out of emotional rape , all the while condeming the "rape culture" of real artists such as hip hop . Ps I dont find any of you intimmidating in fact I see the fear in the ignorrant . Speaking of ignorrant I have yet to be told 1 single thing from 1 single person about my recent media exposure , while Im very sure that lies in your fear of being embarrassed when faced with a refrigerator repair MAN who holds more talent and intellegnce in his little finger then the intire GE corporate higherarchy, but there is the possibility I am wrong . I have convinced members of my family including a family lawyer of this mass media conspyricy which fortuniatly has kept me out of the loony bin . The obvous goal of this stalker like harrassment , Leno Im nothing like you , Im an artist who cant run from a fight , your a joker hiding in a closet. That self proclaimed star dancer from last night I will leave alone , he's right I cant hurt him any more then he hurt himself, still dont know his name or how he knows me but he is right , he's really cool. Fear is the only weak emotion and I have no weakness I cant crush with heart . DOOOOO UUUUUUUU

Hope to hear from all you fresh fish real soon Im getting hungery

FUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFUFU ur cool FUFUFUFUFUFU

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[quote name='DudeAsInCool' timestamp='1302806870' post='193331']
I enjoyed the freeform flow
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^^^^^^^^My first responce...on my first "free flow" Thank you, allthough it was a hair soft (untill you steped back and did the math )^^^^^^^^
Aftermath is the shit Nikki3 got my <3 young money got nothing but respect , and NYC even though you slamed doors in my face and towed the pimp mobile (hahahaha) still cant hate ya

just thought I would spend a min clearing that up

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860-482-5946- Im a very new rap writter (would like to someday be a rapper) from ct .bassiclly I want to run away with Gwyneth and work with Jay-Z is that toooo much to ask .hahaha the good news is thats far from the crazyiest thing Ive every wrote but it may be the crazyiest thing I ever beleived. long strory short I have 0 industry schooling and no one I can trust in this world . If Jay-Z was serious about the job offer tell him I will owe him more then I can say. So as odd as it may seem a call from someone to set up an appointment and talk . Im kinda itchin to start scatching some new stuff that might blow the doors off the wizard of oz bit

sorry about the spelling Im used to not letting anyone read my stuff

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860-482-5946- Im a very new rap writter (would like to someday be a rapper) from ct .bassiclly I want to run away with Gwyneth and work with Jay-Z is that toooo much to ask .hahaha the good news is thats far from the crazyiest thing Ive every wrote but it may be the crazyiest thing I ever beleived. long strory short I have 0 industry schooling and no one I can trust in this world . If Jay-Z was serious about the job offer tell him I will owe him more then I can say. So as odd as it may seem a call from someone to set up an appointment and talk . Im kinda itchin to start scatching some new stuff that might blow the doors off the wizard of oz bit

sorry about the spelling Im used to not letting anyone read my stuff

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