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Carlcaine

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try stay open minded, put pen to pad like i did
who hurt you, oh grime did
ware you down grinded
only just registerd how do u find it
saw beatking.com so tryed it
first post so dont chat shit

first post yet, its better than most of these new topics
sting ray to ur irwin away in the tropics
back to the uk back to the topic
first post so dont flop it

why is it so deadout here
writers block? nar people are scared
readin riddles ur mind will get snared
sorry im late, u better prepare
judgement day i declare
like i said im finally here
u need guns n tanks, all sorts of gear

lets start getin twisted n sadistic
left for dead another statistic
blink once, your gone, sorry u missed it
3 inch wonder u cant grip it.

dont get angry cus i vexed ya
real talk, dont shoot the messenger
stay where its safe on msn messenger
i pick what i want like arsen venger

its friday im gonna take yar
im jason, stone mason, i will break yar
waitin for a reply so we can clash bar's
dont take time, reply fast

this is just a little thunder, u wonder how the rest sounds
put down the scissors mines ground
u need to hear how this flows n sounds
my mistake, if i saw u in person u wud get gagged n bound.

cheers for readin i think ur sound.

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Welcome to Beatking, Carlcaine [img]http://www.beatking.com/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/thumbsup.gif[/img]

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try an take ma throne admin
trash talk gets slung in the bin
scary thought, just a white fin
im from the underwater, words of slaughter
luke sky's ma son, u r ma daughter
this web scene is my ocean
u buy drugs, i mix em up n make potions
awww soft skin, u must use lotions
freestyle, u call it poetry in motion
thats just a couple notions
call me great white, with a corse to do damage
a new member ur gonna struggle to manage
suprised, i came from under ocean
with a purpose to catch a web surfer
i know for certain ur getin nervous
i know ur behind the curtain.


btw u can delete the 1 of the x2 posts i did it by accident x

reply fast^^

Edited by Carlcaine

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Deleted the earlier post. Keep up the good work

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nice piece, i liked the flow, im not realy writing at the moment, havent picked up a pen in over 2 months, i do love a good battle but im just not writing at the moment maybe in the future, nice work thoe keep at it

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fuck it ill lay some down later on this its been a while but fuck it i love it lol, im off to work ill lay some down later, it will be interesting for me to see what i come up with, after this brief break from it,

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[quote name='messenger' date='27 August 2010 - 01:07 AM' timestamp='1282896429' post='190525']
fuck it ill lay some down later on this its been a while but fuck it i love it lol, im off to work ill lay some down later, it will be interesting for me to see what i come up with, after this brief break from it,
[/quote]

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im here to send for the messenger
when its 1-0, i wont think less of ya
bare respect, so blessings to ya
i dnt care if i win or lose you i choose
its ma first battle call it a slu

this war is bigger then afganistan
visions vague, im backastan
u come wid a plan, im typin at random
hypin deralict bars u better abbandon
FUCK THE HANDGUN who needs a tool fam
full time worker, cover bare milage essex to camdem
give a fuck if u got 21 mandem
ill bring 3 n still bang dem
im 7 times better than you
words never hurt me, none get through
just a quick 32, reply for ma 72
ur regreting u chose to do this
FUCK A GUN ill use ma fists
on the floor by one hand oh its ma left hand
fool on the floor, btw im right handed
i swing an spit at random, u think i planned it

im just here to make n impact
i know i have, its a fact
time spent, these bars lack
im a fast thinker, close to usain on a track
ur slow, like forest gump on crack
u must have bars on stack
ur 25 n im just a younger
well, im 19 but came from down under
quick brainstorm, im the noise of thunder
ur a supper spammer? i got 6, not even 1'r
just a new commer, ill adjust ma sight
dnt let this keep u up 2nyt
decodin these riddles till its light
nelson road is where i live, come for a fight
ok, ill be at urs when its right
im not here to ofend, how about pick up a pen
im off to go fishin and smoke a benz
peace x

Edited by Carlcaine

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U living in a dream world this aint avatar,
What the fuck u gonna achieve with those barely average bars
Rarely do the savage scar, try tear me a fucking apart
I dare u, u fucking farce, a knuckle don’t buckle a heart,
How the fuck can u put fear into someone that wants death,
How the fuck can u challenge me here ur lucky I fucking accept,
Ur nothing infact ur less, so no I don’t regret,
I only bleed bars so u retards can write down and recharge ur vocab,
go grab ur pen and notepad, so fag,
Is this living up to ur expectations of a battle,
Or a demonstration of why the shit u spit is babble,
My words travel from my adams apple eat ur verse like Hannibal
An animal cannibal sent to kill u and eat ur rotten body,
My hobby oddly , ive gotten dodgy this life has cost me,
The biggest mistake wasn’t asking me to lay a verse,
It was ur mother giving birth, shit it didn’t work,
She didn’t deserve the disappointment,
Did she Carl or mister caine, wit ur fucking silly name thinking ur spiting game,
Think again,
No turning back, so turn your back and aim ur crap in another direction,
Accept it, ive never lost and u aint the exception,
Here ends the lesson,

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[quote name='Carlcaine' date='28 August 2010 - 12:30 PM' timestamp='1283023815' post='190551']
safe
[/quote]



Don't take any crap from Messenger, CarlCaine - give 'im what you got [img]http://www.beatking.com/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.gif[/img]

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[quote name='DudeAsInCool' date='28 August 2010 - 05:56 PM' timestamp='1283036219' post='190552']
Don't take any crap from Messenger, CarlCaine - give 'im what you got [img]http://www.beatking.com/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.gif[/img]
[/quote]


looking at that peice it seems nasty, dont take it personaly i actualy respect u and like what uv writ, its just when u battle u have to be aggresive, i actualy held back, and deleted alot of the nastier stuff, the reason i stoped writing and took a break from writing is because it kept coming out so nasty and negative, carlcaine dont take it personaly i think ur a good writer ,i like ur rhyming, and ur alot better than anyone ive ever been challenged by on here before, so keep at it and keep posting, alot of the time on this site it feels like im the only one,

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:) dw what everys said in battle stays in battle just tryon to think of a decent comeback :D aint had ma internet over the weekend :(

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[quote name='Carlcaine' date='30 August 2010 - 08:05 AM' timestamp='1283180730' post='190589']
i actually cant think of shit all
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Give it a rest for a day and it will come to you [img]http://www.beatking.com/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif[/img]


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this is the first of the trilogy
litte faggot with twitter u cant follow me
ur guts on a spillin spree
ill come by myself, but u bring 3
call me trinity from the matrix
or darren brown, im heavy with mind tricks
i spit, skate, n do kickflips
u didnt expect a skater to b able to do this.
this is war not a lovers spat
ermmm wheres the war at?
im bringin the war straight to ur doormatt
ppfft, ur just a joke man
ull be left 4 red just liek a coke can
aint a hiphop head just grime fam
ill admit u got bare content, or just a hip plan
my plan is to leave a man in dire need of a replacement hip
left for dead ill call u 2pac
bound n trapped wearing a silly little doorag
shut ur trap thats enough of that i aint fat, but i eat MC's thats a rap

ill be honnest i got a sinnister motive
spittin venom call it corosive
tbh, i control this
cod4 im pro at dis
i know i was slow with a reply to ur dis
but im back and orousing
u got talent but aint worth scouting
stop shouting n pouting, lay u dwn like tiles
call it grouting.
im done summin you up you may be up n comming
mr cannibal i will be churnin ur stomach
and making you throw up
i sense badness n delusion my conclusion is exclusion
here comes my crap from my direction
futher inspection of my stool is a fool who thinks his words are cool
ringer wipe ur drool here comes the war go stack some tools.

peace breadbin x

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careful dont freeze jeeze im a underpar with ease so much venom ur veins will cease
why would i call your name when no-one knows who you are overpar bars ur n ak47 to my scope i aim far
find it easy to type swiftly like the rise of fifty cent hell bent on sendin for the messenger, that message u sent, was it an orgasm to ur cunt, i apoloigise i despise being blunt but u barbled some font
now im back to confront, see look im freestylin this message that im compilin will be the end of you
ill get u a violin, when i get violent, viginlate's head up on the tridant
see when it comes to battles i carefully select them, talent is my prey n prove i can disect them
when i put thought into dilect i know you respect them.
i tryed hiphop its ontop of grime, lovin metaphores thought n time seperates the weak from the sublime
put some time in, waiting for the message that time brings, this is what happens when u try some different things, sorry im digressin got full respect u know im messing, im a higher power u can start conffessin, i wont be suprised if this rhyme i comprissed , suppresed memorys of a messed childhood
just give up now i would, you should it would be good for your health, unless you got something
that could match this, im sorry it if u cant match a factlist, trust me i got stacks of tracks just like n ipod, u can call me the rhymegod, actually the end of time kid, i dnt understand you
invalid rhyme retard silly invallid, naughty retard, ull be gone by the end of the trilodgy, call this an missin art, trilogy is 3, this is only the second part

peace

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[quote name='Carlcaine' date='10 September 2010 - 10:40 PM' timestamp='1284176425' post='190781']
[u][b][/b][/u] I TAKE IT I WIN THEN? THIS SITE IS FUCKIN SICK WITH ITS ACTIVITY N WOT NOT PEACE OUT FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKERRRRRRRRRRRRRS
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no u dont win, u pm me asking if i would lay down a few bars with u, this isnt realy a battle, otherwise there would rules , on how many bars and votes, if u want a reply ill give u one, but i like u and didnt want to insult u anymore,

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[quote name='messenger' date='11 September 2010 - 02:37 PM' timestamp='1284237472' post='190790']
no u dont win, u pm me asking if i would lay down a few bars with u, this isnt realy a battle, otherwise there would rules , on how many bars and votes, if u want a reply ill give u one, but i like u and didnt want to insult u anymore,
[/quote]
Dw im waitin for a reply, just call it a light hearted battle. its only battle talk mate x

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