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[b]thoughtless[/b]

your thoughts - i caress
into cardiac arrest
and at best your sense will force you to digress
to digest - my metaphors poking through your chest
like food - open wide - take the truth - ingest"


[b]text[/b]

dirty text - messy jizz
on her face in general - knowledge cums quicker than a pub quiz
fizz pop star gonna go far as long as you stay away from my biz
cameras distracting
ignore the law & order
three courts of sterling silver - service
with a smile makes me nervous...
wanna leave - gonna go
pick a flight in the corner


[b]comfort seeker[/b]

six 6 x 9's and 4 tweeters
in other words i have less followers than speakers
and even the weakest - words can pierce skin
so sharp your new ear-rings will make your ears ring
sting, like a mazda's wing
body dropped - quite a lot
cause money aint my thing
see i never passed begin
ive tried never to give in
celebrations? i throw parties in the bin

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You're off to a good start. Come back in a day or so and then do a little polishing. The best writing comes from rewriting.

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