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**I keep fighting………… listen
Keep reading keep writing
Seething underneath strike you down I’m white lightning
Your reading too much into my intentions
Vile style….a viper in the cipher
Easily riled
I can act civilized but I’m also wild
I ‘m livin life hot and your all so mild
Force not to be reckoned with
Smokin trees OR my enemies
And I don’t give a rats ass where I ash
I’m long-lasting bong-blasting
Full of passion lashing out in a violent fashion
Vicious when I’m given restrictions
Get claustrophobic like its boa constriction
So gather your gear or rather
Dress in a way that most of us can’t even fathom
Deep……….. Into… hot water I go
Boiling blood bubbling just below the surface
I need to know what my purpose on this earth is
You see there’s not enough room inside me
I’m filled to burstin
I think that’s why I’m so intense
Intent on living my life on the fence
Content to use my sense of smell to enjoy the sinsemelia scents
We all need some way to vent
I tend to believe that I’m better person once the pressures relieved

**Its like my life is a mess
Get all cocky when I listen to meth
Or death metal riffs deliver black petal roses
leaving you stiff
A dark omen rhyme like I’m possessed mouth foamin
While peoples jaws hang open
I fight dirty like I’m soap and
Half of ya’ll…cant even cope ………….think you got a chance …..nope
Your pathetic I’m easy on the eyes aesthetic
Run through your crew like diuretics
A ball of vibrating energy dianetics
Don’t rub me wrong like plate tectonics
Causing quakes and sonic …………..booms
One verse and the rooms consumed
Look into my eyes and you’ll see doom
Death always seems to loom
Large and sinister
Behind me feels as if its time to find me a minister
To release these demons inside me

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Your rhyme schemes are good. You might want to consider checking out other songs/lyrics for structure and see if you can do another draft that is better structured.

Keep at it! :thumbsup:

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