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I keep my d*ck wrapped up cuz tricks is mad ill/
cuz now a days hoes are more toxic than a hazard spill/
yea the p*ssy is good, she make me wanna f*ck for days/
but ill be damned if she have a dude pissing razor blades/
so when I go deep, Im wrapped up, full suit on/
and I still spread that p*ssy like mustard-"poupon"/
Usher had it bad, with his confession of what its made for/
Cuz Shorty dont seem so pretty behind the clinics door/
With the doctor writing notes and shaking his head/
And tells you a box of trojans are cheaper, compared to meds/
Heres your prescription, you need to hurry to the store/
And you need to be thankful that this one can be cured/

...Be Safe...

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not bad as a little rym but keep the structure clear towards the potenial audiance

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[quote name='Prime' date='01 September 2010 - 05:21 PM' timestamp='1283383272' post='190646']
not bad as a little rym but keep the structure clear towards the potenial audiance
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like ure style uve got a good sense of humour and a quick tounge dont shy away from saying what is in ure heart thats how ive got to were i am now dont stop writing u need a voice to express how ure feeling safe mate sk8zy

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