just a random poem plz rate

[creepa]

i keep having this dream
coming apart at the seams
like a teddy bear
then i finish having no hair
or string
the cat comes in
and knocks me off the table
i fall apart cus i am unable
get chewed up im phsically unstable
i feel that im covered in slobber
so i sit there and sobber
my heart out
this was all my fears
no one hears or sees my tears
but one
it was my mum
scoops me up in her hand
takes me to the shop
try and jump and hop
but fail
we walk in
the bloke is sewing
im repaired
she drops me
i have no head.

[DisturbedPoet]

Idk how to rate this, but it's not bad. Work at it. It can always be better, no matter how good you get. check out some of my shit if you want.