see what you think

[creepa]

these are the first bars i have written tell me what you think.
they are pretty basic but they might be quite good.

dont clash me,
who do you think you are,
you struggle spittin just one bar,
someone hit you, you would see stars,
ill get you runover by a couple of cars,
you will fly far,
now you know your not hard,
go in a club you get bard,
everyone thinks your a retard.
slap your wrist,
thats slapstick,
'comedy',
you are a prick,
'mug',
dont give me a shrug,

we need to get you off of these streets,
everyones heard of my beats,
im always on repeat,
ona stereo,
your a homo,
' a faggot',
you cant hack it,
go sit down,
actually for safetys sake,
get out of town,
cus once i start i dont stop,
buy a gun from the shop,
*pow*,
your head goes pop,
into pieces,
you will be sleeping with the fishes,
six feet under,
come on bruv wheres your hunger.

[DudeAsInCool]

Not bad. Keep going.