release me

[messenger]

World release me, im freezing

World release me, im freezing

So cold I don’t feel my heart even beating,

Im needing a way out

But I know grey skys gonna stay out

Freezing frozen old wounds are weeping and still cut open

Im hoping that this whisky and cocaine’s gonna close them,

But for now ill stay frozen,

It’s the same shit different day,

And the pain will stay for the next day the next day and the next day,

So the best way to escape all the darkness,

turn my back on the world, remain heartless,

See the hardest achievement in life is to live it,

Have the heart to be fucked over and over and still forgive it,

But im growing colder as im growing older and each visit ,

Too the dark side, sets a piece of me free,

Im trapt, world release me,

[DudeAsInCool]

Not a bad start. You should continue working on this one, maybe add a break to it, and another verse.