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BLACK LIVES MATTER!

just a lil grime ting


benny_g

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some people say im angry, some people say im vexed

but people dont understand the shit im carryin upon my chest

ders gonna be no time to rest

na no time to take a breather

cos ders gonna be no end to snakes comin in ur circle tryin 2 deceive ya

but thats just a little piece of life, so build ya bridge and get over it

sometimes life can be like climbing everest

but never give up and never be forced to quit

cos half the people just talkin shit

der jealous of ur talent

mad cos they studied in school to get the good grades that u havent

but u can keep A pluses ill stick to D minus

cos every track i touch turns into gold like i was midas

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That was pretty good, but you should type normal. Don't type out the words in the way you say them because I had to re-read some of the parts cuz they didn't make any sense. Overall, that was some real shit man.

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That was pretty good, but you should type normal. Don't type out the words in the way you say them because I had to re-read some of the parts cuz they didn't make any sense. Overall, that was some real shit man.

safe for the feedback cuz, ill type it out properly next time i put something up, safe tho star

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safe for the feedback cuz, ill type it out properly next time i put something up, safe tho star

No prob man, a little constructive criticism can go a long way and improve the way you write your rhymes.

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