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okay this is ur shot after this battle i dont want u runing ur mouth or laying bars over any of my shit again,

The Rules.

rule 1

50 bars ( that dosnt mean write ur shit out in one confusing block like u normarly do, it means 50 lines no more no less,)

rule 2

best of 3 votes wins. ( voting will be for rhyming talent vocab and diversity ). Mods or an Admin will vote in the event of a tie

rule 3

all insults remain personel either directed to me or u, no mothers familys or girlfriends brought into it.

rule 4

ur the challenger so u lay first.

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wat is this mine and ur batle yh bruv ???????

yeah. this is how u should of went about battling, not laying bars over previous battles.

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dont even waste my time u ant even prepared them rhymes be4 u evern start spitin them lines times up i shud shoot u right inbtween the eyes u told me a lie u sed u can spit bars and rhymes me and my boys run the grime scene im to big for this scene ur cmin at me like runy beans youve no ive already won this dont u its daniels im cmin at u like swine flu im jst ganna sweep right bye u 1st il tell u how i run my crew then ill tell u how im ganna run u so fuck you!! but every one noes they cant stop me they need me im like a muny tree muny here muny there fuck it my monys every were you wanna gun fuck it ur probly shoot ya self in the phum cus ur so fucking dum bruv this ant no sweet ting u look up to the page its beatking this ant no lil fling soon ill be the beat fucking king im like jackie chan u throw a punch at me ill brake ya arm fam dont try put on the charm ill stick the scorching borer in ya arm then ill ring the muther fucking alarm be 4 go il slap u wid the side of my parm hers my numb 075 shit u ant even ganna be alive your bar ant even on the survive so give me five fuck u you ant even ganna be alive you a dead man walkin bruv u ant ganna beat me u might aswell well delete me u keepin cmin at me wid them shit lines i keep cming at u wid the badist rhymes theres to many of us dieing bruv y the fuck u crying ill leave ur braine in a mes i dont give a fuck im noan by the press c i chat the facts u chat wack ill stab u in the back wat bruv u want some crack fuck u cus im back wiid this badist track

your just like a dove to much in love im like a black bird no love but i kil that fucking dove bruv im from up above ive got the golden glove i ant never ganna die im to flie i got to many eyes for u fucking flies gota go bruv peps wanna lsiten to my bars im the muther fucking star uve pushed me to far you on my to do list trust bruv u ant ganna get thru dis look down my gun your wastid youve just bin done your so dum u wud been alive if u didnt get on a hype

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Say hello to the future of music,

Goodbye to the deluded, disillusioned and stupid,

You did not wanna meddle with me,

Cause being mellow just isn’t me,

Say hi to the fellow that delivers rap simplicity.

Lyrically swallow a punch,

As I follow a hunch,

Cause tomorrow for lunch, im eating the alphabet from A to Z,

But ill start with j and b, and end with k and c,

Keep up your jealousy, hope u enjoy hating me,

But you’ll never have what it takes to be,

King of this rapping,

You been waiting a thousand years for it to happen,

But your acting, so play your role, stick to plot,

But my scenes up next called the bitch got shot,

And this is not a tit for tat spit,

This is the nail in the coffin of a shit spitting bitch,

And u aint stopping this, im ever lasting.

And this is the clever crafting, of a word professor,

The words and the wisdom I give them, each verse gets better,

The letters I shred together will leave u dreading sleep like u was heath ledger,

My verses explode as I expose the next hoe to get choked,

Leave u wit a broken nose, in a comatose from a verbal overdose,

Battles over closed,

Cause your throwing blows, that are too weak to touch me,

It must be ugly living life as a wanna be thug g,

Messenger vs. Daniels,

Shit it’s a lesson for ya can u handle,

The essence of hip hop,

Is the messenger and that’s its stop,

This is not a battle that’s even, so heres your answer

Ur a pussy and im destroying u like cervical cancer,

U can barely put a sentence together,

U barely make sense so im sentencing get a, home tutor to help ya, With your dyslexia,

Im gonna get dude as in cool to put the tools to work,

And add a new section in the site for girls,

So u can keep your bitch spits to your self, occasionally ill pop in and rewrite your rhymes myself

Just to give u some help,

In your verse u say u run the grime scene,

If that’s the case the future of grime music is frightening,

Ur writing, is quite dim, u might bring the typical content,

But your lyrics aint honest, your full of shit,

I’m sick of fucking schooling pricks,

And this is bar 44 but I don’t give a fuck ill keep spiting 40 more,

I don’t need to write half then take a break for a day,

I aint that way, freestyle means freestyle players play,

U aint hardcore, u aint even hard your a whore,

U started a war, knowing youde loose why the fuck did u choose to start it for,

So say hello to the future of music,

And goodbye to the deluded, disillusioned and stupid,

Let the voting commence,

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Messenger takes this one. Daniels warmin' up for a rematch B)

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Why do u use words u dont even mean

Think ur a topman dont rep 4 da scene

I got a few thing to say first of all

Dont use lyrics that r personal

Second of all u dont get gash

So stop tlkin about havin a bash

Ur barz might be fit for the king of the gutters

Better walk out the scene coz u just stutter

If u want 2 speak put ur hand up

In hyde park i prefer to stand up

Cant test me or else u'll get hurt

I'll make u sit down in the dirt

Ur Like disbale ur forest gump

Shut ur mouth u'll get blown liek a pump

u fink ur gud but ur not that nice

ill heat u up like herbs n spice

i heard u went 2 ur manz 4 advice

nex time ill follow u like a trackin device bruv i didnt say i was nice u step up to me im ganna roll u around like a dice u wont even tink bout tryin it twice ill come to ya yard thru ya back yard fam u ant fucking hard your meltin on me like lard bruv count to 3 then come back to me then spit it in 3 then tell me that ur at the top of a tree bruv stop fucking aroudn your in the wrong town make one bad move ur be under the ground my bois make me proud takin dwn a chump like cus people like u an t got the slightis clue fuck u and your bois to bruv u chat wet like winnie the pohhh dont go cry ur eyes out cus im about u beter wach over your shoulder cus bruv wen i c u its over liek a 4 leaf clover 1 shot 2 shot 3 shot naw ur on the spot 123456 i got all the muther fucking tricks so suck your own dick u lil prick naw im ganan leave u to tap back wid ur grap

keep voting peps

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okay im gone touch a rhyme frenzy

u pretend to be the end of me my friend u see

im sicker than ur average

flow grows quicker than ur average

slicker than ur average, ur bitch she gone have this,

i quess im spittting in ur face

ask ur bitch how my seamen gonna taste

i tried to go easy on ya,

sleezy of ya to touch this,

is if a bitch gonna touch this

so what this , fisty cuffs or u gone spit rough bitch,

why does a kid step to men

why does a bitch try to pretend,

welcome my friend to the valley of giants

we aint violent we just shut u up and hear silence,

if u planing to hit back

then atleast make ur bitch trap hit back wit something worth hitting back,

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keep voting peeps. lol like that spit u just layed is gonna help in any way, sit down shut up. u aint even got a vote. and this battles over kid. i droped that little spit pisst up last night and its still better than anything u have ever created,

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I think this one goes to Daniels, which makes it a tie.

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I think this one goes to Daniels, which makes it a tie.

My vote is for messenger. I mean both MC's lyrics speak for themself. And my honest opinion daniels is whack as an MC. He has no structure, he's confusing and his rhymes are can I say elementary. Just being honest. Peace

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Any more voters?

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let me roll the rizla paper,

we straight thugs, deliver haters

to the same faker school they uset too,

whos schooled, well u fool,

let me introduce u too my new tool,

rhyming is where we from,

fuck griming we strong,

we belong to where those bad dreams come from,

u want some well u got it,

we abolish and demolsish the disshonest,

im from the fucking school of we dont give a fuck,

middle fingers up,

ive got a bullet with daniels carved into it so listen up,

u spitting shit

a little bitch

ur spiting bit

out of lirics from other shit

but it still isnt worthy

u dont deserve me

its out now dont worry

hurry messengers figured it out now worry

i aint fucking worried bout this weak spitten

u pre written

ill keep giving u free edjucation

not too edjucate but too keep u hating

take it in , shit scribble this down

u in the presence of the riddler now,

try and figure it out,

true rapping true talent

but u acting yes u havent,

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fuck the voting if u as a emcee or lyricist cant see or acept uve lost ur indenial, come on here and laying bars over other peoples battles aint on, ur shit and ive prooved it, now shut up, case closed over,

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bruv im a soul surviver the flame of ur lighter yh im a born and bred fighter this is gana be over tdai soon as i slit you throat bruv u ant even rockin my boat i ant going dwn im like a float bruv u cant handle my bars lets c who wins this vote in a 123 im ganna let u c who the top man is yes man its me im ganna slap u silly im coming at u right left up down with diferent sounds and plenty of pounds love me or hate me your girls rating me ur the only one hating me but i dont give a fuck ur face is like a back end of a duck your making me chuck im laufing so bad i dont give a fuck i got the pistals the muther fucking crystals every one wants your head my phones ringing 24/7 fam looks like ur dead ur a gd lil boy ur of to heaven i gota warm ak 47 i ant of to no heaven im goin to hell yes fam ring that bell im allways up never fell ur lifes ganna be hell i bet u wish u was a lil girl bruv i can brake any spell im to fast to be put in a cell im only being honest i spit on the mic just like i promised bruv i come at u like sonice to fast for u to get on it bruv u live in a pit

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bruv im a soul surviver the flame of ur lighter yh im a born and bred fighter this is gana be over tdai soon as i slit you throat bruv u ant even rockin my boat i ant going dwn im like a float bruv u cant handle my bars lets c who wins this vote in a 123 im ganna let u c who the top man is yes man its me im ganna slap u silly im coming at u right left up down with diferent sounds and plenty of pounds love me or hate me your girls rating me ur the only one hating me but i dont give a fuck ur face is like a back end of a duck your making me chuck im laufing so bad i dont give a fuck i got the pistals the muther fucking crystals every one wants your head my phones ringing 24/7 fam looks like ur dead ur a gd lil boy ur of to heaven i gota warm ak 47 i ant of to no heaven im goin to hell yes fam ring that bell im allways up never fell ur lifes ganna be hell i bet u wish u was a lil girl bruv i can brake any spell im to fast to be put in a cell im only being honest i spit on the mic just like i promised bruv i come at u like sonic to fast for u to get on it bruv u live in a pit bruv u ant got shit dont fuck wid me ill take u to ur grave no way are u safe i run this place im fuckin serus look at my face bruv dont think u can set this pace im from out of space

every one backin me in this place so fuck u bruv u ant got a fucking clue im the german and ur the jew my bars will nock u to tim but 2 im thru wid this ur just getin dised ill merk u wile im avin a piss 12 game over looks liek the game won agen im beter than big ben

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fam i wrote this wile shagin my brid bruv and still fucked u over bruv one one yh lets c who win ur juts ganna get merked bruv got no time for u wastmen go on spit your best bars and il spit my best one game on fam ur goin dwn

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ur like a anoying dog that wont stop barking, u are not worthy of my best bars, i dont rate u, i think ur shit, leave ur nursery rhymes at home ,

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ur like a anoying dog that wont stop barking, u are not worthy of my best bars, i dont rate u, i think ur shit, leave ur nursery rhymes at home ,

:lol: I feel a war comin' on

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SHUP HERES MY BEST BARS COME ON WERES YURS WEN U LAY YURS C WHO GETS THE MOST VOTES ON THESE BARS START VOTIN THEN COME ON BRUV GIVE IT YA BEST

OH NO DESE GUYZ WANNA HATE ME

FUCK DAT I KNOW DAT U RATE ME

NEVER MISPLACE THIS FACE OR MISTAKE ME

CUZ ARE YOU DUMB DONT TRY TAKE ME

IM DA TUFF NUT YOU CANT HANDLE

HEADBUTT UPPERCUT IM A HANDFUL

YOUR RESPECT GOING ON A DOWNFUL

CORRECT MY FLOW VERY SOUND FULL

LOOK ITS BEST FOR YOU TO RETIRE

CHEK DA BARS I PROVIDE WHEN I FIRE

LOOK GYELS REALISE

ITS ONE GIRL IN MY EYES

I DECIDE TO ADMIRE

DESE YOUTS I NEED TO INSPIRE

SAY IM HATER CUZ YOU’RE A LIAR

YOU CHAT SHIT LIKE STICKS AND CLIPS

COME TO THE BITZ SWITCH BLADE AND FLICK

NOT A SOFT BOY MAN IM HARD LIKE A PEBAL

DON’T SHOT GREEN TO DA TEAM LIKE A REBEL

DON’T PUSH WHITE LIKE A PUSH BIKE

SEE BLUE LIGHTS START PUSHING DA PEDALSMentally ive lost it now thts a cost of coke,

U wanna rob my phone then hope u can outrun a rope,

That slices ur neck when the noose round ur throat,

How u gonna spit lyrics when all u can do is choke,

So rewind back bitch hit a track then ill clap u,

The only midget i witness is u in a tracksuit,

Running round ur business saying how u chasing fast routes,

Please, ur chasing a train thts gone right past u

See i caught tht train coz my brain's lyrically balling,

U play catch up in ur car but its always stallin,

I put my all in, keep brawling, n ima never be calling,

Out peeps t battle when u cant handle it wen u falling.

so im sik wiv tha hits tha twist n blare

ur shit wiv tha bits tha dont compare

kick and share tht lyrics that flare

so quit chatin skils when therz no skills there

some call me dizzy other by ma name

wateva i do idont just ma fame

big in tha im big in tha game

They call me a lyrical time bomb

ratin me as they see me as an icon

never have time off always got time on

never get beat prove dat wen i rhyme on

run out of ink sumhow gotta rite on

rite with the lite off rite with the lite on

spit wida mic offf spit wida mic on

bars got width now gotta put height on

when i was yunga cudnt sleep widout lite on

i was scared of the dark

but now i'll tear u apart if man try 2 hype on

war wid me den wait till ur times gone

shoot a 16 at u den dats ur life gone

im hittin da mark ur rite off im rite on

bars so deep wonderin where the lites gone

everyday im pushin up know dat i fite on

Ill Merk Tempa, Tempa ive got a bad Temper.

Ima Badman for you, Blud dnt you Remember.

You aint a Contender, more like a Pretender.

Ur not Guyfolks, but ur be gone till November.

Ima big Spender. Dnt Jack my Barz Temp,

Im notta Lender. Im the Grime Clash Sender,

Ur Lyrics wont Defend ya. Id hit a little Harder

But I think ur too Tender. Dnt beef me cos

Ima true Eastender. Shottin on the Roads,

More Coke than a Vendor. Ur a likkle Bender.

I grab u by the Throat Temp, then I mite Bend ya.

Remind me of ur Gender! Bit confused so

Ill just call u Brenda. Im sendin again Bren

What is the Agenda?. Ur Swag and cnt Flow.

Show me ur Barz, and I can be the Mender.

Face it then Brenda, its time you Surrender.

And blast off rhymes, within a matter of time

I'm like a leader of organized crime

Destroy within a matter of time

Cuz im an mc that lives with grime

and Your a MC who get too hyped

From a ten word rhyme it took ya hours to type

That's not MCing, that’s just being

weak on his words and never thinkin bout freeing

the lyrical thoughts that I let come out

I'm The Genius of this, I know what it's about

UR A wack MC who claims to be better than

No way I'm frankly more clever than

all of you, each and every one, my son

Pay close attention

I take your brain to another dimension

Hold it, mold it, shape it

You got a knife, yes I wannaUve got 'bare' bars like nothing is in em,

Im religious to the streets, so i guess ur forgiven,

My rhythm is rhyme riddled, listen, im giving u some,

Hitting none, ur a joker, bitch ur as weak as they come,

U aint clashin many men, u aint packing lines,

Ur flashing men in pen hoping theyll suck ur sack dry,

Stop acting invincible, even Pac died,

Ur a pissed off cunt who will never get signed,

So huff n puff n keep spitting ur shit,

I'll leave u shitting bricks im bang on with a script,

Ur nothing but a newbie with his head in the clouds,

Come slew me u true G leave me dead on the ground,

Stop fucking around, k-Ryder ur a creep,

I lay u flat out in a permanent sleep

Im deep in the streets n faggot ive got the latest,

Ur faking the real thing, like a cock of latex.

rearrange it

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i have been partying hard this weekend thats why i havent replied sooner,

i am 100 percent sure that those bars arnt urs or were written by some else for u, the reason i am sure is everything uve layed so far has been farely poor in my opinion, the contents been rubbish and the style is poor, u ryhme in a style i call 1 line rhyme .where u ryhme at the end of the sentance and thats it, my favourite style is 2 ryhme line where u ryhme twice in the middle and at the end, now if u were at a stage in ur writing where u had the ability to use the 2 line rhyme style u wouldnt switch to the shitter more amauter style, this isnt a snap decission i have gone through all ur bars with a fine tooth combe,

in terms of everything previous uv writ ide rate u 2 out of ten. and the last spit was a 7 out of ten, the writing style and the content is way diffrent too, i am sure that peice is not urs, although i could still out write and destroy those bars, i think uv cheated and should be dissqualified, theres no way u can go from shit too being okay, just like that and the diffrence between how weak everything u normaly do is to how that last piece was makes me sure u didnt write it,

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i have been partying hard this weekend thats why i havent replied sooner,

i am 100 percent sure that those bars arnt urs or were written by some else for u, the reason i am sure is everything uve layed so far has been farely poor in my opinion, the contents been rubbish and the style is poor, u ryhme in a style i call 1 line rhyme .where u ryhme at the end of the sentance and thats it, my favourite style is 2 ryhme line where u ryhme twice in the middle and at the end, now if u were at a stage in ur writing where u had the ability to use the 2 line rhyme style u wouldnt switch to the shitter more amauter style, this isnt a snap decission i have gone through all ur bars with a fine tooth combe,

in terms of everything previous uv writ ide rate u 2 out of ten. and the last spit was a 7 out of ten, the writing style and the content is way diffrent too, i am sure that peice is not urs, although i could still out write and destroy those bars, i think uv cheated and should be dissqualified, theres no way u can go from shit too being okay, just like that and the diffrence between how weak everything u normaly do is to how that last piece was makes me sure u didnt write it,

cough

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