Working on a song

[Clinton CASH]

{Chorus}

Hip-Hop is in my mind, Hip-Hop is in my soul/

Hip-Hop is in my blood, Hip-Hop is all I know/

if you love it you'll understand how much it controls/

it seems it's all about the money now and not about the flow/ x2

Verse 1

Yo! I loved you baby and that's straight from the heart/

I tried at a young age to break us apart/

but it didn't happen, truth to fact I had a hidden passion/

don't get it backwards now-a-days a nigga living lavish/

you exposed my weakness, brought me to my knees quick/

Trained Me! so when I rap I can't even see shit/

I blacks out, so pull the tracks out, wit my relaxed mouth/

I acts out and let it be heard like it's my last shout/

I don't flash clout but I lash out before my time is up/

cuz next in line is us to get them signing bucks/

(not finished yet but I will return)

Info:

instrumental - Talib Kweli and Mos Def (Blackstar) - Respiration (Pete Rock remix) - check it out!

www.youtube.com or just about any music site

P.S. show love let me know what you think of it so far. *peace*

[DudeAsInCool]

Keep going. My suggestion would be to find an artist you like and see how they structure their songs - then try and model yours after theirs.

FYI, need a link for: Talib Kweli and Mos Def (Blackstar) - Respiration (Pete Rock remix)