are my bars good

[safe manz]

i ant no badman i ant no sad man

im on this hype fing cuz i got

merked my sum batty man

well ges wot u getin merked bk

by me tha badman wanabe as you say

but i fink yh tha wannabe g

playin with fake straps sayin

yh gona blow of ma nees haha

il get yh girl 2 blow me of so hard

il explode like a nucula bomb

she will be neeling tha floor

like sum low life scum

[DudeAsInCool]

I think your bars feel rushed and too short to really judge. There is no hurry to it - go back and see if you can make it better. Practice makes perfect.

[safe manz]

I think your bars feel rushed and too short to really judge. There is not hurry to it - go back and see if you can make it better. Practice makes perfect.

yh yh fankz 4 yh help man