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i got n ak so dont mess when i spay

bullets will ricashay all over your face

ill chase you round the block with a 9 mill glock

till you get shot

coz mi rhymes will destroy you

slice right through you

as soo as ii start talkin

you better start wallkin

coz ur rhymes are weak

so let me speak

iv be sitting here thinkin

you better shut up and start quitin

and you bend bars like bender

corse il be your sender

it'l be so slender

till the day you surrender

and i rep north west

so dont test

u step two me

ur steppin to suv

it stands for straight up vandals

come test us youl be dismanteld

see me on road

see me on stage

etheir way i got to much rage

n im 15 yrs to the day 9

steppinin up the levals

as if its just some game

whatch me on the cctv

doin thing i shouldnt be

n gess what

theres twoo many man,twoo many many man

in this studio so just go home

u just a lickel waste man

all alone

and im like supermman with out kryptonight

i got a 100 n million 1 bars to spray tonight

and if you dont like in get on ur bike

n get out of mi sight

dont cat mi bars u know there good lol

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firstly i think spay is spelt spray,

okay.

and u must be kidding if u think u packing a ak.

the only thing u spraying is the same shit ur spitting,

i mean what did it take 2 to 3 weeks to get that shit written.

i noticed in ur ryhme u said i was all alone,

i will tear apart ur whole crew without a beat or a microphone,

if thats the best uv got,

then i suggest u stop,

maybe start a car boot sale in a parking lot,

either way its time to drop the act and quit rapping.

cause the only thing ur ryhmes create is loud laughing.

and ill be honest with you , this could be alot worse,

but i pity u, ur shity crew and ur shit verse,

so there u have it ive pisst all over ur weak shit,

come back in a few years time cause right now ur a cheap bitch.

there 16 .

lets have some voting then. and no hard feelings grimey nothing personal just a battle

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dude as in cool ive just noticed that grimey has just copied and pasted his verse from rate my ryhme. let the voting keep going / but surely thats against rules. or is there any rules 1st battle on here

Plagiarism is against the rules in any writing contest. Maybe he used a different name on the other website?

We could use some Rules - why not put some together and see how people feel about them.

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Plagiarism is against the rules in any writing contest.

We could use some Rules - why not put some together and see how people feel about them.

okay. let the voting comence on this. and ill post up some rules tomorrow see what people think. its 3am in the uk i gotta get some sleep. lol

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okay. let the voting comence on this. and ill post up some rules tomorrow see what people think. its 3am in the uk i gotta get some sleep. lol

OK!

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