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yo...yo... ma bars are so tight and tidy/you fink ya an mc but ya not even grimey

next year ill be bigga dan wiley/you wanna clash me its not lightly

im one of a kind there will be no1 like me/im new to da scene but im merkin ya team

while im puffin da green/my bars are dirty not clean/

i berst into da scene like im fukin da queen.

gimmi some feed back dont cuss me up to bad its ma first go at this peice out

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yo...yo... ma bars are so tight and tidy/you fink ya an mc but ya not even grimey

next year ill be bigga dan wiley/you wanna clash me its not lightly

im one of a kind there will be no1 like me/im new to da scene but im merkin ya team

while im puffin da green/my bars are dirty not clean/

i berst into da scene like im fukin da queen.

gimmi some feed back dont cuss me up to bad its ma first go at this peice out

yh der alryt m8

i just started aswell ave a look at mine and gimme sum feedback if u want

http://www.beatking.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=35335

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yo...yo... ma bars are so tight and tidy/you fink ya an mc but ya not even grimey

next year ill be bigga dan wiley/you wanna clash me its not lightly

im one of a kind there will be no1 like me/im new to da scene but im merkin ya team

while im puffin da green/my bars are dirty not clean/

i berst into da scene like im fukin da queen.

gimmi some feed back dont cuss me up to bad its ma first go at this peice out

yh im lovin it... fresh 2 the grime scene. feels gd wen u xpress yaself lyricalli! stay on the site n keep ritin. i'v been grime since 02/03.. hitt me up! :mad2:

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a few more for ya

i jus stepped in da game/but i aint got a claim to fame/

so ya wont no ma name /but ma bars will rain

till ya feel tha pain/runnin through ya vains/and ya going insaine...

just a quick free style for ya tell us wt ya fink

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