Rate these plz

[SynzzKidd]

Basically just started mc'in and shit

one of my 1st set of bars

basically wanna know if der any good

they aint finished and probs need editin

thanks

Yeh im synz, im from b town and dat//

you n your boys dont wanna start a clash//

coz ill come at ya quick like bolt on a track//

leave your guys with more then a thump n a whack//

yh vex me be prepared to take a smack//

dont come at me cuz u better take a step back//

coz ill chop you down quick like lumberjack//

dont expect me to add p'z to none of your stackz//

im down ur chikz throat like pepsi max//

dont claim topspot bruv coz none of its facts//

nar nar nar none of its facts dont tell me to calm down i dont wana relax//

i got pride,yh bruv im not runnin from jack//

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Im synz'kidd N im spittin the truth//

one thing u best no,got nothin to lose//

no need for a crew//

was writin 16s when u cudnt tie your shoes//

dont hype to me bruv coz i will cut u loose//

n like scooby feds'll be lookin for clues//

Im the kid who got the most hype in the youth//

higher then tiles on a roof//

Claim your a badman, thats lies not the truth//

coz straight up synz kid will come up 2 u//

nd ull be spraked on the floor wit 2 quick moves//

[DudeAsInCool]

Not bad for just starting. The second set is missing a line, if it's to match the first set. Keep going.

[SynzzKidd]

Not bad for just starting. The second set is missing a line, if it's to match the first set. Keep going.

ok thanks :)

yh like i said not really perfected yet just sorta jotted down

thanks :)

[mesrock]

yh yh like em mate like the first set more but ova all for your first try good man

[SynzzKidd]

yh yh like em mate like the first set more but ova all for your first try good man

thanks :)

yh same ere prefer first set second set kinda just cuple of ideas jotted down

[SynzzKidd]

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[DudeAsInCool]

thanks :)

yh same ere prefer first set second set kinda just cuple of ideas jotted down