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every1 im bak wit some nu rhymes


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as a younger i was rhyming alot

all day everyday none stop

wit ma ill barz get 2 da top

go on spit a 16 show ur a flop

i spit a 16 the place im heating it up

every1 every where knows im on top

if da barz aint sik listen 2 the flow

neva heard nuffin like it boy better know

and dnt beg it

neva heard of u before

im da 1 taking ur girl 2 da dance floor

after dat will be closing da bedroom door

im moving so quick next year im goin on tour

blud you dnt no wat ur here for

spit a 16 il spit a 24

and my barz will alwayz be better than yours

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Not bad - just keep writing, and rewriting, and you will get better

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they are right it got a lot better. i actually bobbed my head reading it.

oh and who are you directing it to??

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