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Caught In The Moment


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I am a clever weaver

I am a faithful believer

I am a truthful deceiver

Who are you

what can you do

can you escape woodoo

I am a long distance transmitter

I am a short time committer

I am a creator of cosmic glitter

I am a unique universal master

I am a total complete disaster

I am a very flexible blaster

I am a single lurking predator

I am a sneaking silent sedator

I am a strong violent investigator

I am a man nothing in between

I am an invisible human born to be seen

I am a builder of an everlasting dream

I am a glowing immortal spider

I am a serious ultimate provider

I am a solid excellent divider

I am a tasteful fluid of vengance

I am a colorful painting of resistance

I am a delightful sound of provenance

I am a powerful one of a kind magician

I am a stupid fool following some tradition

I am a never ending story of futuristic visions

I am a truly comitted sinner

I am always starting as a beginner

I am in the end standing as the winner

I used to be a little boy

I used to be filled with joy

I used to be hunting a new tomorrow

but now I'm caught in the moment of sorrow

OJO 2008

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Each of the stanzas are extremely well written..

but in the end, the person you are describing seems quite complicated. Have you considered simplifying to a specific theme.

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  • 9 months later...

Hi All ! Sorry for the delay ! I have moved back to Norway , so been very busy for a long time now ...Caught in the moment ..it is me speaking about myself , as it is in basicly 99.9 % of my writings ..


please feel free to visit my main website for all poetry and music etc...


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