All u emcees r weak bruv!

[SmG..]

i aint 6foot3 but dat dont mean i cant fukin break ya knees,

dus it g,

so fink quickly b4 u start wiv me,

cos dat means dat u start wiv ely, n start evry mufuka dat stands behind me,

all da boys from da hbc, da ecb,

plus al dem u c sittin on pali.g,

n if dat dont scare ya, den i dare ya 2 cum 2ma area,

cos we'l tare ya from tendon 2 ligament,

cos were known 2disfugure men,

afta dem pussios from haddenham were addin em,

2da list of wanabe badamen,

out of all da boys weve had, nun av eva bin stabbed,

cos wen we roll we cum bak wiv da bali's n bats,

n whipe out ya whole pussy cru like dat,

n das a fact, so hold ya mouf n dont chat,

cos if we av 2cum bak agen,

we'l cum bak wiv da gats n we'l spray ya men in ya own endz,

cos u no me n u we aint friends,

so dont b ringin me 4 a 10s,

cos i'l skank u, say fank u, n i'l send u on ya way,

wot u gona say,

u wana refund!?,

i'l bitch slap u! n say make me pay!,

u fukin pussio,

even da girls say ur gay, n all da gays say dat u swing dere way,

u get boid bruv!,

evry single day,

ur a bitch, wen tha bongs go round ur da 1hu gets stitched,

u choke offa 2toke pass,

o ya arse like an uppercut from amir khan,

u cant dance, u prance around da room,

trippin wiv da broom, like u on shrooms,

mind vibratin from da boom of da bass,

get claped in ya face, blood is all u taste in ya mouf, hed spinnin as u get beat down,

beat down 2da ground, pound after pound,

ya feel bones break, body ache,

ya fink 'dis pain i cant take!',

u open eyes 2c ma face, as i pull da gat from ma waist,

load up da bullets... cock back,

u stare down da barrel as i pop dat, av u got dat!?...

...cos dat'l b ur fate if u aint got dat!....

rate dat shit u wastemen!...

[chubzzy]

i didnt understand it and your rhymes are pretty stupid.

[Lil Blaze]

to be honest good for a first time lol

but to much of ABUSIVE language makes you look like an idiot as it makes no sense and a 2 yr old can make better rhymz ! TRY TO think before you make them !

[DudeAsInCool]

to be honest good for a first time lol

but to much of ABUSIVE language makes you look like an idiot as it makes no sense and a 2 yr old can make better rhymz ! TRY TO think before you make them !

Like he said, it was only the first time. Practice makes perfect, so don't be discouraged.

[benny_g]

SWAG

[Lyrical Assassin]

Learn how to muthafuckin type bitch. You have weak ass muthafuckin rhymes, and what the fuck does bruv mean? Do you mean bruh? And if you did, that shit is stupid as fuck, i hate people who say that shit. Dig your own grave already, bury yourself, and die a slow death.