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back a year ago and just a little bit,

suicide was on my mind guess what i wanted to slit,

if you guessed right then you probally guessed the wrist,

in other words with life i was about to call it quits,

but i thought to myself how it would affect,

the lives of my family and even friends,

there was another option,

remeber the guy who wanted to sway from the ceilin,

i thought about that once or twice,

did not really care if i took my own life,

i could of even ran to the kitchen and grabed a butcher knife,

well you never really know what could happen tonight,

he says to himself "This is the last time i ever see light",

people who dont care foget about you when your alive,

but when its on the news that moring when you wake to see light,

its imbeded in your heart,

that a 15 year old boy has taken is own life.

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the prose isn't bad, but it is pretty dark. curious as to why the boy felt that way.

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