This needs a hook

[B_DUB]

we started at 12 then came the sun

we didnt want to stop so we cranked dat beat on

quick like a lightswitch i grab yo bitch

you thought she wouldnt leave ya

but she buyin that christina

you know i keep that white lady

haha you didnt tell me she was a screama

if you dont know my army, you better get the pages

bitch i'm from paign county, i be blowin out ya gauges

i dont need to silence, i need an eruption

while you was under arrest, i was under your woman

i ain't no sally dude, nah i aint afraid of you

get ya click go head try an run me through

i am the new sort, bdub burnin hot like scott storch

i love dat dirty south, i love that mia

it's not where im from but where i love to play

doesn't it sting you got more bread

but im the one in ya hood gettin all the street cred

take a shot at mine an' i bust ya head

take a hundred flip it twice nigga heard what i said

i only say it once so read my lips

im a motha fuckin' hustla mane ice fresh

i got money on my mind an' my mind on ya bitch

she fuckin me cuz she ain't on no boozy dick

ima whole lotta hustla nigga unique like amish

i be swimmin' in dat pussy like it's olympics

play lottery with me and you get slim picks

i play the slot machine between yo bitches tits

my ice all around will make you slip

rollin dice uptown nigga we the best

caspa spinnin let the dj revolve

mixin my shit harder than armored vaults

i was at the mall wit ya girl takin stills

stop hatin on us an get some real thrillz

all yo hatin gonna get me rich like big gates

sittin high ridin fly takin yo girl on real dates

poppin champagne made nigga slick like slate

im all you wanna be cos my army is bape

im so hot i burn ya eyes like mace

believe dat bitch im the heaven's gate

we like the mother fuckin' janitors

cleanin up the rap game of all the fuckin' amateurs

slippin never bitch we dont ever die

gettin money na i ain't gonna lie

pound afta pound bitch

this how it go down

stay stuntin on them bitches ya heard me?

ya'll i need a hook for this song...

if i use it when i record ill give you credits

peace 217 tray oh five

bdub

Edited February 2, 2008 by B_DUB

[DudeAsInCool]

Keep the focus on the guy and the girl and give it a beginning, middle and an end

[B_DUB]

thanks but im just looking for help on a hook right now, once i throw beats down for it ill have the structure set up different.

[Jeremiewilson]

Keep the focus on the guy and the girl and give it a beginning, middle and an end

you need a beat holla at me [email protected]