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it seems as if no one is feelin what you spittin,

you almost have to be up cookin in the kitchen,

im livin what is writin in my mind its unforgetin,

for sins im unforgivin cause i wont ask for forgivness,

till im sure that im relentless and committed to my sentence,

cause i know how shit can happen in a fraction of a moment,

when you know that there's no actin in the action of a moment,

betta grab ya gun and aim it dump it and reload it,

betta keep this shit in mind dont touch if you wont hold it,

if you aint golden you betta behold and just know it,

cause you cant blow and if you reep it you soe it

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it seems as if no one is feelin what you spittin,

you almost have to be up cookin in the kitchen,

im livin what is writin in my mind its unforgetin,

for sins im unforgivin cause i wont ask for forgivness,

till im sure that im relentless and committed to my sentence,

cause i know how shit can happen in a fraction of a moment,

when you know that there's no actin in the action of a moment,

betta grab ya gun and aim it dump it and reload it,

betta keep this shit in mind dont touch if you wont hold it,

if you aint golden you betta behold and just know it,

cause you cant blow and if you reep it you soe it

thats really fresh, it reminds me of eminem

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it seems as if no one is feelin what you spittin,

you almost have to be up cookin in the kitchen,

im livin what is writin in my mind its unforgetin,

for sins im unforgivin cause i wont ask for forgivness,

till im sure that im relentless and committed to my sentence,

cause i know how shit can happen in a fraction of a moment,

when you know that there's no actin in the action of a moment,

betta grab ya gun and aim it dump it and reload it,

betta keep this shit in mind dont touch if you wont hold it,

if you aint golden you betta behold and just know it,

cause you cant blow and if you reep it you soe it

Nice work!

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