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Haven't Posted In A While - Two Quick Songs I Wrote


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I'll Go On

(Verse 1)

I love the way that

Im not invited to the

Coolest parties

I love the way that

My name isnt in the yearbook, no

Not a picture, or mention

I won friends with detentions

The teachers, hated me

Or was it cus they were scared of me

(Verse 2)

I love the way that

I didnt have my very first kiss

Till I was 15

I love the way that

I tried my best in class

But noone cared

No girlfriends, or best friends

I played on my own

Im sick of, my parents

Cus all they do is moan

(Chorus)

Ill go on

Dance into the sunset

Ill go on

Dance into the sunset

It burns my eyes

(Verse 3)

I loved the way

You mum liked me more than

All the kids in my year

I wore glasses

And a high backpack cus I

Couldnt afford much else

I played some jokes, and pranks

But no one dared to laugh

I tied my own laces together

Just to get some cheap laughs

(Chorus)

Iâl go on

Dance into the sunset

Ill go on

Dance into the sunset

It burns my eyes

Israel

Verse Part 1

Days dont seem as bright anymore

Ive resorted to playing with the neighbours

And hiding behind doors

Verse Part 2

Days are slow, as I get bored

Watching TV twenty four seven

All the programs Ive all seen

I dont know what Im watching

I wasnt quite listening

Chorus

Please come back home, please come back home

Im so lonely, I am

Alone

Verse Part 3

You have gone, a month too long

Youve left me, with a dry tongue

I sit at home all the time

Looking at pictures of you and me

Verse Part 4

I hope youre coping, Ill see you soon

The phone calls I receive are blessings

But its not the same, I cant see you

Chorus

Please come back home, please come back home

Im so lonely; oh Im so lonely

Please come back home, please come back home

Im so lonely; oh Im so

Alone

Oh so, alone

Bridge

Youve gone away, I wish I could go

But I left things too late

Its not the same, without you

Cus now I have to masturbate

Chorus

Please come back home, please come back home

Im so lonely; oh Im so lonely

Please come back home, please come back home

Im so lonely; oh Im so

Edited by ricky9
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Both are pretty well-written, but I'm not sure how the 'sunset' verses fit in to the first song; you might want to play with the phrasing in that section to make it fit a little bit better with the theme you have going

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