My love for you

[ChopperX]

I tried to push my feelings aside

But that didn’t felt right..

I just wanted to say that

I love you..

Do you love me too?

That’s the question I’d want to ask..

But this seems to be a difficult task..

From the very start,

I loved you with all my heart..

If I’d give you my world, would you be my girl?

To me you’re like a pearl

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

You’re the greatest girl I’ve ever known

I want to have you for my own

And whenever you’re close to me..

I want those moments to last forever

And I’ll guarantee

That I’ll never threat you bad, never..

I’d go trough fire for you,

Fight for you,

I’d do everything to make my love shine through (Maybe this line is better? : I’d do everything to show my love to you)

Every time I see you..

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

I told you once, I told you twice

But being with you feels so nice

Now I have to get something off my chest

I’ll do my best:

My love for you..

My love for you is like

My love for you is like

My love for you is like

My love for you will last forever..

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

I will keep loving you.. For forever and ever.. Forever and ever.. Forever.. Ever..

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As you might have noticed, the -> My love for you is like (3 times)<- sentences are not finished.. I couldn't think of anything to use, so I wanted to ask if someone could help me with this? Many thanks in advance!

Also, rates please? ^^

Edit: Uhm.. Should I change the 3rd couplet (From -I told you once- till -My love for you will last forever-) or just get rid of the whole thing?

Edited April 16, 2007 by ChopperX

[DudeAsInCool]

I tried to push my feelings aside

But that didn’t felt right..

I just wanted to say besides

That I love you..

Do you love me too?

That’s the question I want to ask..

But this seems to be a difficult task..

From the very start,

I loved you with all my heart..

If I’d give you my world, would you be my girl?

Take my hand, never stay apart?

When you're not around

My heart stops beating, but life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when your love is strong

Baby can’t you see I love you so? Is that so wrong?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

That's all I can do

You’re the greatest girl I’ve ever known

I want to have you for my own

And whenever you’re close to me..

I want us to be just alone

And I’ll guarantee, that I’ll never treat you wrong

I’d go trough fire for you, Fight for you,

I'd do everything to make my love shine through

Is that so bad, just me an you?

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

I told you once, I told you twice

But being with you feels so nice

Now I have to get something off my chest

I’ll do my best:

Bridge

My love for you..

My love for you is like

My love for you is like

My love for you is like

My love for you will last forever..

Return to one of the verses above and close

Somehow I think the song is too long. There are too many verses. So

I'd take another look at what you have above, simply and cut the rest

below. Hope the above comments were helpful

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

My heart stops beating but my life goes on

I guess that’s the way it goes when you love someone

Baby can’t you see I love you so?

I never want to let you go..

If you could only see things through my view,

You’d know that I’ll keep loving you…

I will keep loving you.. For forever and ever.. Forever and ever.. Forever.. Ever..

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As you might have noticed, the -> My love for you is like (3 times)<- sentences are not finished.. I couldn't think of anything to use, so I wanted to ask if someone could help me with this? Many thanks in advance!

Also, rates please? ^^

Edit: Uhm.. Should I change the 3rd couplet (From -I told you once- till -My love for you will last forever-) or just get rid of the whole thing?

[ChopperX]

Yes it did help, thank you very much again :]

Oh, and I still couldn't think the 3 sentences to end the My love for you is like.. with. I only have one so far, is it any good? :

My love for you is like the surging sea, wild and passionate against the sand

Someone told me this one, but isn't this one used pretty much?

Edited April 17, 2007 by ChopperX