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New Indie Song - I Love You (But Do I...Yes I Do)


ricky9

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(Verse One)

I met you at my mates house, love was in the air

I did what you ordered ma'am and I grew my hair

I remember our first kiss as if it were yesterday

We were on a bench in the park and I didn't know what to say

I see you in school and I see you in the town

It makes me horny when you walk around in your dressing gown

I haven't told your secrets and I reminise about our fun

I think of you everytime, everytime I

(Chorus)

Love you

I love-uh-uh-oh-oh you

(Verse Two)

We broke up before but I'm getting a second chance

A second chance to show you my love for you has last

Remember when you taught me how to do that thing you do

From the kiss, I so miss, everything about you

My love for you is greater now, it's getting oh so strong

It's getting so big now I had to write this song

I want you back in my life I miss those precious eyes

You're cute and short and sexy, I'm the luckiest of guys

(Chorus)

I love you

I lo-uh-uh-oh-uh-oooove you

(Solo)

(Verse Three)

I hope I haven't upset you by doing something wrong

I hope you live me to and that you are singing along

Cus i know you have the voice yeah it's so sweet

I heard you once before and you blew me off my feet

(Chorus)

I love you

I lo-uh-uh-oh-uh-oooove you

Not great, bit of humour, made it in about 5 minutes

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It's a cute song - all it needs is some tightening. I'm sure I screwed up you humor (I edit scripts, so no offense if I have taken over lol )

A couple of suggested edits

Cut: 'I did what you ordered ma'am and I grew my hair'

Cut: ' in your dressing gown

spelling: reminisce

stretch the word horny into hor - nay for emphasis

When we broke up before, you gave me a second chance

A second chance to prove my love, for you could really last

I Remember what you taught me, how to do that thing you do

From our first kiss, to the way you walk, to everything about you

My love for you is greater now, it's getting oh so strong

It's growin' inside me, you know I just had to write this song

I'm so happy to have you again[/b,] I missed those precious eyes

You're cute and short and sexy, And I'm the luckiest of guys

(Chorus)

I love you

I lo-uh-uh-oh-uh-oooove you

(The verse below suggests another breakup, but you're on you second chance--so I adjusted it to reflect that)

(Verse Three)

I hope ('ll never upset you. by doing something wrong

I hope you always love me, and will always sing along

Cus our love was always meant to be , so I've written this special song

So love will always be with us, which never can be wrong

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