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Im a wanna be

Im a guna be

the best muther fuckin rapper that youl ever see

Il be on your tv an on your radio

I know you like my style so come on an sing it ho

Bring back the old school rap you muther fuckers act like you know how to rap

so im a show yous how its done so keep on readin

But be carfull though this shit can make your eyes start bleedin

make a mess all over the desk and computer screen then,

im a guna have to listen to you bitch an complain on how my lyrics gone an done sumthin fucked to your brain

I can make a rhyme at any given time

spit so quick youl be loosing your mind

Youl lose it so fast you wont know where to find it

when really you you wont care by then youl be blinded

from the these words of a rapper who is very very violent

Now all i gata ask you is why your sitten there silent ?

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  • 11 months later...

Okay first off this rap shows no intelligence whatsoever.

You contradict yourself when you say you're bringing old school back because that had no old school flow at all.

Maybe if you try foccusing on the flow and the grammar intead of trying to use cursing every other line, you might make some progress.

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  • 1 month later...

So this is a song that has to be read on the computer screen as our blood from our eyes (yes, that's right people) will go over our computer screen and desk? Wow! I mean, I can see Eminiem wishing he thought of that. Why didn't Lennon ever do rap?

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