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Hey I wrote about half a song a while back, but this is the only thing that's progressed. One day a tune and rhythm just appeared with it and now it gets stuck in my head. MY head, and I wrote it!? But yeah.

It's a rock song, but this bridge is pretty metally. I've used brackets to indicate a screamer taking hold of those lyrics. It really doesn't seem like much, but I figured I might as well get it out there.

(You have held on for way too long)

I think it's time you paid your overdues

(You think you're so strong and nothing ever gets to you)

From birth to defection you'll see your reflection

I can explain anything, and I know that last lyric could look like nothing, but I'll explain it now.

Although I admit to thinking of it before realising it means something.

It means that from the time (you) were born until the time something went/will go very wrong (that turning point in life) (you) only see what (you) think (you) are.

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