In-Dense Thoughts

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

For starters, if this is in the wrong forum, I apologize...the Poet's Corner: Lyrics forum appears to be just for real bands (you know what I mean). I do have some actual music that was created, but I need to get some permissions in order to make it available.

For those that know a chapter in my childhood, these songs will make sense to you. For those that don't, these songs will make sense of my childhood. This set of music was written about 12-16 years ago. Not many have seen it. I do not think they are necessarily professionally written, but they do convey emotion and I believe they do it strongly. For whatever reason, I have a tendency to do the (parentheses) thing with songs I write. I guess I'm never content with just a single word or phrase. I did write several other songs in high school, but they did not survive the journey of time. They were bitter, but I believe a love song may have surfaced at the time also. I regret losing those and not permanently recording them for safekeeping.

Your comments are welcome. I do not expect these songs to entice your best of feelings. I have 1 song that I have plucked at for probably the past 5 years. Perhaps I will finish it someday. Perhaps there will be something else. As best as I can wish it...enjoy.

psychofun

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

Metal Express

Another day of the same old shit

My patience burns with what they see fit

Compromise can’t even begin

This tale will live to their very end

They refuse to see that we need freedom now

But the way they work, we’ll never know how

They believe that heritage governs the best

We’ll tell them what they can do with the rest

chorus:

You think you know, you think you’ve taught

The only thing you’ve spread is what we’re not

We will be free, we’ll be obsessed

Eternally, on the metal express

I find no reason to be withheld

Yet they continue to show their tyrannical guild

Trapped in their jewel, my independence fades

The hand they lend has razor blades

They’ve got their grip tight; locked down fast

The portal of escape must not be passed

Chained to the boat, assigned to the oars

They use us as if we were their whores

chorus:

psychofun

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

Paroxysm (Shake Your Soul)

The time has come for me to flee

Escape from your pitiful tyranny

Resistance is none, you’re not in my way

Your life is spared another day

You cannot harm me, you will not try

Any attempts and you will die

You cannot stop me, I’ll go where I will

You are to my advantage, says the death drill

Pre-chorus:

No one can help you, there’s no one to call

The more that you try is the more that you’ll fall

Chorus:

Shake your soul –Lose all control

Shake your soul –Never a whole

Shake your soul –Shatter the goal

Shake your soul –Death’s welcomed toll

So you chose the easy or in your case the hard

Now I know my future will never be barred

You won’t need to help me prepare your crypt

‘Cause I’ll be seeing you on your last trip

It’s time that you go, I smile at the thought

Six feet under with worms you rot

Existence is gone, you no longer show

No more saying that I don’t know

p.ch../ch.

Solo(s)

No last chance, no farewell

See you on your train to hell

No balancing on the razor’s rim

Feel the fate of Paroxysm

Chorus to fade…

psychofun

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

UNMASTERED PAST (MY OUCH)

My lack of time you will not reveal

Only your unleashed anger I'll feel

It's not my fault your childhood was damned

Why let the cycle repeat again?

Unwilling to face the strife in lost years

The easy conduit is upon solemn ears

'The proper discipline' conceals your blame

Retrify the truth so we can be shamed

Meaningless pain

Yelling insane

Outburst severe

Understanding not here

Could I see a sign?

Help liberate my mind.

Will I ever be free of this cage in my brain?

Or shall I continue to bear your stain?

You think your grasp goes beyond my own gates

But I will not foresee that as a true fate

The ties once needed are no longer bound

A new life exists where harmony's found

No fear of retribution-- It's me who's owed

Just tears of realization-- My fire's done flowed

psychofun

[MikeHunt]

Nice..I would say you are well on your way to having someone record them ..or you releasing them to eager listeners...Salute'.

And we all thought you were just another pretty face in the crowd....LOL

[cube]

i'd like to hear some audios ^_^

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

i'd like to hear some audios ^_^

lol...In all honesty, audio wasn't written for these. They're just lyrics. The audio mentioned above is for different music of a different caliber. It was also created within the past 5 years. I will post the links as soon as I get some authorization.

psychofun

[method77]

In Greece you can go to different 'demo studios' and rent the place by the hour and get them to play and record your music. Many good and known bands have poped up from those studios. Perhaps try that if you have some close by?

[Lord_of_the_Dense]

I am not ready for that step just yet but I will keep it in mind. I don't even have the music penned and am not sure if I will. And to actually sing these songs is another story. They were written in pain and anger and just imagining to sing that is a bit scary. I think I would have to feel that way again and I am not in that frame of mind anymore. Perhaps someone else can write the music and we can share the credit. Thanks for the support though. I will keep my mind open for possibilities.

psychofun

[method77]

those studios can also help you write the music. All you do is bring the lyrics. A good studio costs a bit more though

[Kooperman]

My congratulations to LotD for having the stones to post his innermost feelings for other people all over the world to see. It's not easy to expose yourself like that.

That being said, I hope you also write some lighter things, lol.

[method77]

best lyrics where written by people that were mad or sad so stay mad

:angry: shootin'

[Shawn]

Cool stuff man. read this::

[DudeAsInCool]

I have a composer and some DJ buds. Maybe I can hook you up some day.