open call out

[Rivet]

Cmon people vote vote to get these forums going!

[method77]

With nothing to reference I wasn't sure where to go with it. So I listened to N.W.A.'s 'express yourself' a few times and hit on an old memory. It was someone saying that if you are sitting down to write you should write what you know about.

Probably NSFW

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Hey bitch I see you, just up to your tricks

A few times we hooked up for a f*ck and a fix

Play it however you like, I know it’s an act

You like me pushing up in you, g-ddam that’s a fact

You moan, groan and twitch while arching your back

I take it all in and keep filling your crack

You talk shit all around and you know that’s not right

But bitch I’m beaming ‘bout your absence last night

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

I’m not that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

Last night I spent sipping and licking the toad

Woke up this morning with an extra wide load

You stayed away fixing, thinking you can play it cool

But after a night of crunking bitch I need love for my tool

So with a knock on the door and a few words of greeting

I stripped her ass down and we both took to breeding

Now I know that you’re pissed and I hear your lips flapping

But you set it all up so you know that I’m clapping

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

Now I’m not all that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

Hey you run around blindly while spending my cheese

But you always come across without hearing please

I seeing you fuming, cursing the day you brought her by

You wish pain on her and say you hope that I’ll die

So you just keep hoping and you just keep wishing

I told you when we met that I was a man on a mission

Did you really belief that I was just f*cking around?

I said I planned to hit every single hole in this town

You could have stopped this if you had been here

But you weren’t bitch and I’m shedding no tears

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

Now I’m not all that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

So....uh

What’s your mama up to?

:bow:

[Shawn]

I think that's one each.

[real OG]

aight cool its 1-1 its on now lol

uppin for more votes

[Excrement_Cranium]

I'm splittin mine in two here...

1/2 to OG for delivering battle style

1/2 for Shawn for flow and content

[Rivet]

Oh dude come on, that makes 1.5 vote each! Can't you define your vote a little to go only one way?

We wanna get this battle voted on and done with!

[real OG]

yeh come on man thats just plain weird lol atleast ya could say tie or sumthin or just explain a bitt more and give a FULL vote to one of us??

[Rivet]

Yeah make your vote 1.5 to one person, and .5 to the other. Or sumthin! We wanna finish this thread before a new one is started!

Damn these forums are slow huh... I thought there might be a little mroe interest.

[Shawn]

Always slow on the weekend.

I'll concede the first match.

[Excrement_Cranium]

Ok, fine fine....

too late though if shawn submits.

It is such a toss up.

Shawn had far better structure, reading it, bobbin my head along it flowed better.

But, I'll give it to OG since it is a battle thread, and not an original song thread.

[Rivet]

OK, 2-1 real OG.

And what's happenin with Shawn? Concede or submit?

I just tidied up the half of a song I've written. Jeez, it feels good :D

[Shawn]

I'll concede this one. I'm more an original song flavored candy.

[real OG]

aight looks lyk i win lol

if you mods close threads like wen they get old then close it up...

[Rivet]

I still reckon you shoulda stuck it out Shawn, but meh. real OG wins! lol

[real OG]

hey shawn would it be alrite if i take that Song of yours and post it under my name (Lyrical myrical) i give you all the credit i just wanna see what they all think about it thats all...

so how bout it??

[Shawn]

As long as you give cred it for it go ahead.

Feel free to link back to here so that maybe we can pick up a few more willing to battle.

[Rivet]

Yeah that would be cool. As long as we don't get flooded with homie g's wit attidude problems. <_< As long as they respect music in general, they're welcome in my eyes.

[real OG]

ok then man full cred to you ill even post the link on here so you can see ok??

[real OG]

there you's go here is the thread link thingy lol

http://www.2pacboard.net/showthread.php?p=158623#post158623