open call out

[real OG]

open call out to all you suckas who wanna battle??

[Shawn]

Text?

I'm up for it.

[real OG]

yeh txt man...

aight how we guna do this we both spitt a ryhme then otha ppl vote who won??

if that is right then it will be 5votes to win

3-0 ko if ya want and who's goin 1st?? you or me mite not be able to spitt right now mite lata on im at skool and its almost time to go home

so i prob will 2nite or 2morro at the latest

[Shawn]

With nothing to reference I wasn't sure where to go with it. So I listened to N.W.A.'s 'express yourself' a few times and hit on an old memory. It was someone saying that if you are sitting down to write you should write what you know about.

Probably NSFW

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Hey bitch I see you, just up to your tricks

A few times we hooked up for a f*ck and a fix

Play it however you like, I know it’s an act

You like me pushing up in you, g-ddam that’s a fact

You moan, groan and twitch while arching your back

I take it all in and keep filling your crack

You talk shit all around and you know that’s not right

But bitch I’m beaming ‘bout your absence last night

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

I’m not that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

Last night I spent sipping and licking the toad

Woke up this morning with an extra wide load

You stayed away fixing, thinking you can play it cool

But after a night of crunking bitch I need love for my tool

So with a knock on the door and a few words of greeting

I stripped her ass down and we both took to breeding

Now I know that you’re pissed and I hear your lips flapping

But you set it all up so you know that I’m clapping

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

Now I’m not all that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

Hey you run around blindly while spending my cheese

But you always come across without hearing please

I seeing you fuming, cursing the day you brought her by

You wish pain on her and say you hope that I’ll die

So you just keep hoping and you just keep wishing

I told you when we met that I was a man on a mission

Did you really belief that I was just f*cking around?

I said I planned to hit every single hole in this town

You could have stopped this if you had been here

But you weren’t bitch and I’m shedding no tears

Cause I plugged your sister, in the back and the front

Bent that little bitch over while puffing the blunt

Now I’m not all that charming and you know I’m not smooth

But your sister was gasping while I was filling her groove

So....uh

What’s your mama up to?

[Rivet]

There is no way that was a freestyle. But it waas pretty good...

[Shawn]

lol

True it wasn't clickity clack it took about 15 minutes to write. I didn't even notice the word freestyle.

[Kooperman]

lol

True it wasn't clickity clack it took about 15 minutes to write. I didn't even notice the word freestyle.

It would have taken me more than 15 minutes just to type it.....then I would have scrubbed my hands vigorously with lye soap as punishment.

[real OG]

is that from a song?? if so that aint ya own work and that aint a freestyle....

neva uless when you "battle you up the otha person etc etc... so if ya wnt try again... make a new thread if you wnt... i dnt mind then il post mine up

[Shawn]

Naw it's original, but admittedly I'm probably poorly suited to the notion of just freestyling. You might be best served by trying to get someone else.

You could start a new thread if you like or I could delete my posts in this one.

[real OG]

nah i dnt care if ya wnt ill post sumthin up now it is guna be a freestyle it would be uppin you so no offence or anything...

[Shawn]

so no offence or anything...

No problem. The earlier piece gives you a bit of me to swing at. Better than complete infamiliarity.

[real OG]

yo yo this is my flow/

yeh im always on the go/

im always ready to put on a show/

so ya betta not stand in my way//

cause this shit right here ima bout to spray//

yeh,im guna spray my shit in ya face/

comin at you so hard it feels lyk you got hitt by cops mace/

man your a fuckin disgrace.../

cause you dnt belong in this rap game//

coz you neva guna get the fame//

coz ur ryhmes are not even dope/

man i heard betta shit from a fuckin pope/

see im the spawn of the devil//

y ur the spawn of sum fag named nevil//

yeh, see wen all this shit is sed and done/

this battle i have already won/

cause i just blew you away with my AK Gun/

see i bringing my 2 gats to this fight//

"BANG" from my left "BANG" from my right//

now bitch...ya seein heavens light//

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aight there you go as i sed a quick freestyle...

ill admitt sum of the lines were pre writt from sum of my otha rhymes

in my books coz i have lyk heaps of books with rhymes and shit in them

[Shawn]

It's hard to beat a guy that works the Pope into it. :good job:

[Rivet]

Both were really good.

real OG's was more suited to the Freestyle idea, but Shawn's looks like it had some more thought put into it. Hard choice to make a vote, so if you guys make a new thread I'll vote on it.

[Rivet]

Naw it's original, but admittedly I'm probably poorly suited to the notion of just freestyling. You might be best served by trying to get someone else.

Shawn don't get discouraged or anything. Its interesting to watch people trying new styles etc. Give it another go in a fresh thread maybe, and let real OG spit first?

[real OG]

hey any1 else want a shot??

cum on wanna get this sub forum goin wiht this...

[real OG]

cum on sum one on here has gotta rap part from me...

[Rivet]

Start another thread. Maybe find a member who seems to be into rap and pick on them?

Hey I happen to know for sure that you have some pretty madd lyrics in those books of yours - why don't you pick a few and put em up for rating in the Rate my Rhymes section? You don't need whole songs if you don't want to, just select your faves.

Jyst a suggestion.

[Excrement_Cranium]

No time this week, graveyard shifts and school,

but if you think I'm passin this up, you have to be a fool

when I got time to peep a beat that bobs heads

I'll be back to rip your ass free from shitlock dreads

no beat to feel, no blooper reel and spitting no ebonics

go against me, you must see, you'll need your hooked on phonics

and you might trip and diss me for melanin defficiency

but step it up, I'll cut you short, with lyrical proficiency

[Shawn]

So can a few people at least vote so we can start anew?

And where did the guy who wanted this section created go?

BTW, that's pretty cool excrement

[Excrement_Cranium]

Thanks man...

But we didn't start the fire...

[real OG]

Thanks man...

But we didn't start the fire...

what you mean "we didnt start the fire"

every1 go to rate my rhymes and rate it outta 10 plz wanna know wot you all lthink??

[Rivet]

So can a few people at least vote so we can start anew?

And where did the guy who wanted this section created go?

Y'all lookin for me? I'm the one who pushed for a palce like this to be created. But I don't rap. Thru my eyes, this subforum is an extra, I was mainly pushin for the Rate my Rhymes and Poetry sections.

OK, I'll cast my vote in a sec.

[Rivet]

Who is the vote out of? There's now 3 raps up in here!

First, between Shawn and real OG, my vote goes to-

real OG

[real OG]

cool 1-0 uppin for more votes its between me and shawn since he was the 1st to accept...