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i was up your girl doing pay as you go verse (1) we was on my sofa tits were on show slipping and sliding bumpin and grinding mum walks in then slams tthe door bang her once more now im finished wih the whore i walk her downstairs my mums throwing the chairs girl says im out so i rave and i shout dad comes in i give him a clout he gives me one back my jaw goes crack im like man that was wack!!! it was me and your girl (chorus) the most beautiful twirl always looks tidy i always say (you should be my bridie) it was me and ur girl goin for a ride verse (2) she was sucking my dick tryin to hide so much deepthroat she yelled and she cried she says sorry i tried she cant carry on she sits back and stares cant help but look at her pair eyes back on the road tryin not to care cant help but glimps i see a couple of pimps now im swerving different side of the road now i move back too far give a tree a wack!!!

[quote name='DudeAsInCool' date='04 April 2010 - 10:27 PM' timestamp='1270416468' post='188668'] I thought is was humorous and sexist :) You might right a few more verses and add some breaks and choruses before you add any music to the lyrics [/quote] kk thanks for the advice man

i keep having this dream coming apart at the seams like a teddy bear then i finish having no hair or string the cat comes in and knocks me off the table i fall apart cus i am unable get chewed up im phsically unstable i feel that im covered in slobber so i sit there and sobber my heart out this was all my fears no one hears or sees my tears but one it was my mum scoops me up in her hand takes me to the shop try and jump and hop but fail we walk in the bloke is sewing im repaired she drops me i have no head.

plz rate my barz tell me whether to put it on a track or not. ive got the fastest flow always put my skills on show i will shoot you with an arrow and a bow straight in the head ur in ur death bed with the grim reaper hes the grim teaser hes gonna eat ya grims in black on his own track he sells crack and many drugs he drinks beer in many glugs he is smoking lots of buds at once he is a stoner you are a loner cant get a boner your dead in a coffin of wood and led nailed in broken shin lost your time i am the KING OF GRIME!!!

these are my second set of bars. plz rate them out of 10. tell me if you think i should put them on a track. i was up your girl doing pay as you go we was on my sofa tits were on show slipping and sliding bumpin and grinding mum walks in then slams the door bang her once more now im finished wih the whore i walk her downstairs my mums throwing the chairs girl says im out so i rave and i shout dad comes in i give him a clout he gives me one back my jaw goes crack im like man that was wack!!!

these are the first bars i have written tell me what you think. they are pretty basic but they might be quite good. dont clash me, who do you think you are, you struggle spittin just one bar, someone hit you, you would see stars, ill get you runover by a couple of cars, you will fly far, now you know your not hard, go in a club you get bard, everyone thinks your a retard. slap your wrist, thats slapstick, 'comedy', you are a prick, 'mug', dont give me a shrug, we need to get you off of these streets, everyones heard of my beats, im always on repeat, ona stereo, your a homo, ' a faggot', you cant hack it, go sit down, actually for safetys sake, get out of town, cus once i start i dont stop, buy a gun from the shop, *pow*, your head goes pop, into pieces, you will be sleeping with the fishes, six feet under, come on bruv wheres your hunger.