[New Bars - Hazard]

i'll park up your girl like its park and ride

my man'll base with the nines

my man'll base with the grime

flows so cold spit frozen lines

i got flows and rhymes

come to the war with exploding nines

u man will never run riots in the dark

but you man will try get busy with your bars

but you know ha comes cold and hard

like streets with the frozen cars

my man'll get backed out then sparked

cuz whats past is the past

now i've mastered the arts

im a star with the barz

so im always in the limelight

always gonna grind tight

always gonna rhyme nice

[LIFE]

theres one thing in life that everybody lives for

your mom your dad yeah you might wants kids or

you might wanna live for the rest of your life

lowe all the stress and lay down your knife

kids just ignore what they hear on the news

but they cant empathise put themselves in the shoes

of the people whose suffering

fate just keeps on keeps on shuffling

sometimes for good sometimes for worse

parents dont wana see thier kids in a hurse

cause it digs down deep, then stays there for life

kids nowaday loose a friend to a knife.

and thats why the truths gettin told

kids cant go out on the road on thier own

cause they just get scared and run to thier home

its where they feel safe and nobody knows

where their hidin they got a reason to hide

and a reason for cryin, turn on the tele

and you'll see that reason killins in the world how many a season

ask yourself cause we just loose count, cause they wana be the top man

have the last shout, but we should all be equal

the rich the poor whats all of that real for

they should have the same money and have the same rights

but we cant do that why its just life

people say to me thats not fair, yes it is no its not ok i dont care

yes, well i think you should theres kids gettin killed we should have done all we could

cause we can be better, we can never stop this hey never say never

we can do anything if we put our mind to it we need participation and then we can do it

put our heads together and we can just pull through it

pull through what? there's kiddin gettting stabbed n shot.

--by hazard ya' dnt knowww

www.myspace,com/dathazardman rate my tunez plz

[my first barz.. plz rate them]

can someone give me some feedback?

even just a rating out of 10?

[my first barz.. plz rate them]

not finished yet.. some parts of it i plainly dont like.. and some part's i think flow well

levelin you with my lyrical view

these lyrical bars they'll leave u a clue

a clue to say this is how u spray

spray bars till im levelin u (<< hate this)

these bars have flames in the fray

no lyrical sway, merc man everyday.

bars spray cause im followin through

write of your name with my lyrical brew

wipe of your shame like shit off my shoe

swipe of your jaw as the strap fly's through

[my first barz.. plz rate them]

well.. i've yet to find a proper flow. so help with this would be appreciated. a few of my mate's are mc's and i get bored sitting there whilst they spit, so i'm writing my own.

good and bad comments wanted. i'm new to the grime scene

slashin my way yeah, through the chorus

drillin hole's in ur face, makin it porus

my indigenous race, british they call us

dont bring beef to my door i'll cut up all of yus

now i'll carve my pride, into your chest

right about time, to invest.

in a stab proof vest, to cover your breast

my origional crest, dig in deep with a knife

pray i wont, take ur life

i'll wash man up with a wave of the grime

rinse man out with the rhythm an the rhyme

man should be skeptic this chorus is hectic

i;ll mould this stage with my own dialectic