YungPhantom_23

yo words of advise...if your gonna call it a rap...atleast make it rhyme

yo man i kno u aint tryna diss me....ill put an R.I.P sign hangin of yo bitch ass and ya wack rhymes....i aint got the time to mess wit yo lame shit...when u can get real then u might have a chance and heres some advise on ya raps....QUIT BITCH CUZ HEY U SUCK NEED TO GO AFTER YOUR REAL DREAM AND GO FUCK THE GAY PARADE>>>>IF U WANNA SAY I SUCK THEN RETHNK....LISTEN TO THE TACKS 1ST BICTH....IM HOT UP IN THE ATL....IM BOUT TO GET SIGNED WIT GRAND HUSTLE STUDIOS....THATS T.I'S INDUSTRY....SO ILL CALL U OUT ON TH BIG SCREEN . BITCH...PEACE

my rhymes are so sick someone hand me the nyquil/ i let my bitch steal yo bitch faster than a dyke will/ keep talkin shit and i will stich you like a night quilt/ my thuderous flow kills like lightning strike will/ and im the chosen one im gods gift to earth/ i've had hataz tryna get me since my mom gave birth/ but they cant get me cuz im ungetable/ and i'll always be around cuz im unforgetable/ ima be talked about for genarations to come/ i'll have more followers than a nation son/ ima new style with amazing flow/ hit you so hard you won't know which way to go btw i made officially made ungetable a word...lol...send feedbsck rate it on a scale of 1 to 10 peace out!!!! Official ZYoung Phantom Music Space

i aint tyrna critisize and shyt but you aint got no type of flow whatsoever...just try to make the words atleast rhyme together and if you ever need help or shyt just hit me up....listen to a couple of my tracks and tell me what you think about them....www.myspace.com/riseofthephantom1234...no hard feelings just helpful words...take it to consideration and let it go to waste on the real

oh damn i ain even notice...that was supposed to say sorrow but i just typed it wrong...thats my fault...but thans anyways

yo i aint understand none of that neither

yo this shit is nice...kepp at it...yo u got a music myspace...if so hit me up...www.myspace.com/riseofthephantom1234

born in 93 the first year of my life/ aint never had a mother to be there by my side/ it was a tragedy the day that my grandma died/ i couldnt except the fact that she was out of my life/ and i will never forget the day they sent my dad away/ its tearin up my family im watchin it fade away/ so i stayed by my bed everynight and prayed/ that my family will reunite one day/ i got hataz in my life tryna make me quit/ they hatin on my talents cuz they aint worth shit/ just take me away from the life i live/ cuz ive lost so much and now have nuthin to give/ take me away to a place where theres no tomorrow/ where theres no harm done and i feel no sorry/ cuz the life that i live keeps me so stressed out/ i been on the wrong path so show me the right route/

yea cuzzo thats watz im talkin bout...kepp at it and alwayz go strong

ight thnx DUDE atleast someone knows what true talent is

im not takin shit like that from a dumbass who cant spell...a simple word...hahaha u funny man

first off that didnt make sense...and secondly howu tryna help someone when u tellin them they garbage and need to quit

so u wanna call my shit wack...HAVE U SEEN THIS SHIT....ITS WACK AS FUCK MAN...AND U TELL ME IM GARBAGE...MAN AFTER THIS I DNT REALLY GIVE A FUCK WHAT U THINK ABOUT MY SHIT CUZ THIS JUST PROVES IM BETTA THAN YO ASS....PEACE OUT GARBAGE MAN

man fuck u cracka i know u aint tryna help nobody out so fuck that shit...and santa did get me somethin...it was ya moms and i joined her in bed...tell her i said thnxs 4 tha good time and ill see on new yrs..hahaha

and the second to last line was supposed to say u aint got no type of talents my shit is betta then what u make

what the fuck u talkin bout it takes me forever....bitch i have a life i dont spend every second of it on this site....ill come on here see what yo bitch ass said then write what i feel like writin then leave the site...its a simple a clear that u just a fake rappa that aint worth wastin my breath on

yo after im done u gone be runnin to ya mama/ cuz my flow hit u so hard u recieved a head trauma/ im putin u to sleep so go ahead a grab ya pajamas/ u aint bout shit but im bout those zeros and commas/ cuz fuckin wit me is like walkin on death row/ one wrong move ill leave ya chest full of bullet holes/ and u just good for standin on the corner waitn to blow/ and u talk to much shit yo self asteem must be low/ and im comin through like a fuckin earthquake/ im sended shockwaves through ya body and bitch u fake/ u go type of talents my shit is betta then what u make/ so stop fuckin wit me before u meet ya fate/

why the fuck yo pussy ass always tryna talk shit/ you the one who spends all ya time on ya dads dick/ sittin on ya knees beggin him to skeet on ya lips/ so stop tryin me im not the one to mess wit/ cuz ill still fuck you up even if u abstinent/ store u like some food and put u in my cabinet/ cuz im a rapper eater like lil wayne bitch/ and im the hottest mutha fucka in the game bitch/ cracka is a name for some trailer park trash/ and u can never catch up cuz im fast like flash/ we was racin to the trophy and yo ass came last/ so stop tryin its GAME OVER for yo ass/

bitch i aint steal none of yo wack ass shit...mutha fuka thats y yo lame ass choked after that second one with yo bitch self...man dont u got some dick to ride eit yo homo self....mutha fucka prove i stole yo shit....instead of talkin all that bullshit y u wont just freestyle instead actin like a bitch and chokin

JUST CUZ GO YO ASS AINT HAVE SHIT TO SAY/ U WRITE A PUSSY COMMENT AND CALL MY SHIT GAY/ WELL U BETTA RETHINK ABOUT WHAT U GONNA DO/ CUZ WHEN THIS IS OVER I WIN AND U LOSE/ MY NAME WILL BE TRAVELIN THROUGHOUT THE WORLD/ I WILL BE SURROUNDED BY MONEY AND GIRLS/ U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY BOXES AND HOMOS/ EATIN OUT TRASH WALKIN AROUND WIT NO CLOTHES/ CUZ YO POOR ASS TRIED THE WRONG NIGGA/ U THOUGHT U WAS HARD UNTIL I PULLED THE TRIGGA/ I SHUT YO ASS UP AND IT ONLY TOOK ONE SHOT/ SO THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU RUN UP ON MY BLOCK/ CUZ U ACTIN LIKE ALL HOT WHEN U NOT/ U AINT NUTHIN BUT A PUSSY AND IM THE BIG SHOT

man stop bullshitin u know u just a fake/ my rymes hit u so hard it'll make yo body shake/ and u know yo poor ass aint makin no cake/ fukin with me man u makin a mistake/ and yo ass sitin here tryna diss but cant spell/ u spelled break with an A what the hell/ and ima show u the way ima take my ass/ right pass yo ass cuz u dont want what i blast/ cuz my shit will have u knocked out for weeks/ and u wont ever get cuz i put into deep sleep/ and stop frontin u pussy bitch/ u woulnt ever hold a gat if yo life depended on it/ cuz u aint nothin but a waste sperm/ im done with yo ass and i hope yo lesson was learned

yo show some respect for this shit cuz its hot unlike yaself...jkjk..but yea if any1 wanna battle im down for that

ima show u wannabes what its like to be a rapper/ first ur hard now ur soft fuck you cracka/ if aint gonna finish hard then u might as well back up/ and take all that lame shit with u when u pack up/ its Young Phantom on this shit so take some notes/ to be a good rapper u gotta have some flow/ u gotta always go strong until they aint want no mo/ and even if u r the best u can still grow/ u aint gotta be born in the ghetto to rap/ theres playas in the ghetto that rap like crap/ but u gotta know how to get to the top asap/ and any playa that tries you just bust there skullcap/

yo im down wit dat...hit me back when u ready for this

ima show u wannabes what its like to be a rapper/ first ur hard now ur soft fuck you cracka/ if aint gonna finish hard then u might as well back up/ and take all that lame shit with u when u pack up/ its Young Phantom on this shit so take some notes/ to be a good rapper u gotta have some flow/ u gotta always go strong until they aint want no mo/ and even if u r the best u can still grow/ u aint gotta be born in the ghetto to rap/ theres playas in the ghetto that rap like crap/ but u gotta know how to get to the top asap/ and any playa that tries you just bust there skullcap/