[Windy City]

I met this girl she's super cool, i met her ass right after school
U'd like her if u knew her too, 5 piercings damn with 6 tattoos
On the outside man she's super sweet but the inside damn she's super rude
She'll tell u what u wanna hear, and u'll end up buyin her a subaru
Now this bitch right here is jus playin niggas
Her mind real sharp but they aint scissas (scissors)
I'm too smart for all that shit so i sit back while her game withers
Girl u know i see u ballin, runnin shit like the fastest shoes
I do that shit too the only difference is I dont practice boo

I won't act a fool i aint like these boyz that try actin cool
They talk their shit like they're packin stool
But they soft as fuck like satin wool
So i powder up and start smackin fools
Dont bring ur game i'll recognize it, it aint tight ur shits phony
Grab my dick and start breathalizin, in other words bitch blow me

This post has been edited by Windy City: 23 April 2012 - 02:56 PM

[DisturbedPoet]

Your definitely going in the right direction, but unles you spitting busta rhymes rhymes fast and it sounds good.
You got to emphasis the rhyme more. and switch it up, but make it all fit like..

Met this girl she super cool,
Met her at the bleachers,
right after school
You'd want to hit it,
if you knew her too,
Body piercings looking sexy,
with those tattoos.
On the outside man she something sweet
On the inside damn she's super rude
No matter how smooth,
of a payer.
she'll play ya.
She'll tell u what u wanna hear,
let it go to her ego,
if you shed a tear.