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Posted 28 July 2011 - 01:50 PM

remember when we first met girl you blew my eyes ,
i was only fifteen your beauty got me terrorised.
You told me you'd stay with till the day i die,
but i guess that memories fade as time flashes by.
i'd like to see you but i don't know where you are,
you should watch me my life as changed i gotta
bigger house and a nicer car.
remember when we use to travel in the bus,
well when you come back we'll be in a jet with
air stewardess comin' wit us.
But there ain't no good life without you,
Girl I want you back and i swear it's true.
Hope you have memories of me at least a few,
gettin' you back is number one on the list of
things that i gotta do.
There ain't no one who loves you more than me
Last time I saw your face girl you looked so sweet.
While i'm writing this I regret the old days,
But we left the past behind we both went our own ways
But let's bring it back to life,
I could be your husband and you could be my wife.
Girl just tell me when you coming.

So I can hit it in the morning

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So I was inspired by the song "In the morning" by J Cole feat. Drake
and it actually kinda fits with the beat.
Thanks for reading this and please comment.
See ya

This post has been edited by the one u gonna know about: 28 July 2011 - 01:55 PM

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Posted 28 September 2011 - 07:47 AM

nice piece bud.
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