[DudeAsInCool]

[daniels]

bruv im a soul surviver the flame of ur lighter yh im a born and bred fighter this is gana be over tdai soon as i slit you throat bruv u ant even rockin my boat i ant going dwn im like a float bruv u cant handle my bars lets c who wins this vote in a 123 im ganna let u c who the top man is yes man its me im ganna slap u silly im coming at u right left up down with diferent sounds and plenty of pounds love me or hate me your girls rating me ur the only one hating me but i dont give a fuck ur face is like a back end of a duck your making me chuck im laufing so bad i dont give a fuck i got the pistals the muther fucking crystals every one wants your head my phones ringing 24/7 fam looks like ur dead ur a gd lil boy ur of to heaven i gota warm ak 47 i ant of to no heaven im goin to hell yes fam ring that bell im allways up never fell ur lifes ganna be hell i bet u wish u was a lil girl bruv i can brake any spell im to fast to be put in a cell im only being honest i spit on the mic just like i promised bruv i come at u like sonice to fast for u to get on it bruv u live in a pit

[daniels]

[quote name='daniels' date='Nov 27 2009, 02:18 AM' post='186262']
bruv im a soul surviver the flame of ur lighter yh im a born and bred fighter this is gana be over tdai soon as i slit you throat bruv u ant even rockin my boat i ant going dwn im like a float bruv u cant handle my bars lets c who wins this vote in a 123 im ganna let u c who the top man is yes man its me im ganna slap u silly im coming at u right left up down with diferent sounds and plenty of pounds love me or hate me your girls rating me ur the only one hating me but i dont give a fuck ur face is like a back end of a duck your making me chuck im laufing so bad i dont give a fuck i got the pistals the muther fucking crystals every one wants your head my phones ringing 24/7 fam looks like ur dead ur a gd lil boy ur of to heaven i gota warm ak 47 i ant of to no heaven im goin to hell yes fam ring that bell im allways up never fell ur lifes ganna be hell i bet u wish u was a lil girl bruv i can brake any spell im to fast to be put in a cell im only being honest i spit on the mic just like i promised bruv i come at u like sonic to fast for u to get on it bruv u live in a pit bruv u ant got shit dont fuck wid me ill take u to ur grave no way are u safe i run this place im fuckin serus look at my face bruv dont think u can set this pace im from out of space
every one backin me in this place so fuck u bruv u ant got a fucking clue im the german and ur the jew my bars will nock u to tim but 2 im thru wid this ur just getin dised ill merk u wile im avin a piss 12 game over looks liek the game won agen im beter than big ben

[daniels]

fam i wrote this wile shagin my brid bruv and still fucked u over bruv one one yh lets c who win ur juts ganna get merked bruv got no time for u wastmen go on spit your best bars and il spit my best one game on fam ur goin dwn

[messenger]

ur like a anoying dog that wont stop barking, u are not worthy of my best bars, i dont rate u, i think ur shit, leave ur nursery rhymes at home ,

[DudeAsInCool]

messenger, on Nov 26 2009, 11:14 AM, said:

ur like a anoying dog that wont stop barking, u are not worthy of my best bars, i dont rate u, i think ur shit, leave ur nursery rhymes at home ,

I feel a war comin' on

[daniels]

yh iyt bruv wasteman bruv

[daniels]

SHUP HERES MY BEST BARS COME ON WERES YURS WEN U LAY YURS C WHO GETS THE MOST VOTES ON THESE BARS START VOTIN THEN COME ON BRUV GIVE IT YA BEST



OH NO DESE GUYZ WANNA HATE ME
FUCK DAT I KNOW DAT U RATE ME
NEVER MISPLACE THIS FACE OR MISTAKE ME
CUZ ARE YOU DUMB DONT TRY TAKE ME
IM DA TUFF NUT YOU CANT HANDLE
HEADBUTT UPPERCUT IM A HANDFUL
YOUR RESPECT GOING ON A DOWNFUL
CORRECT MY FLOW VERY SOUND FULL
LOOK ITS BEST FOR YOU TO RETIRE
CHEK DA BARS I PROVIDE WHEN I FIRE
LOOK GYELS REALISE
ITS ONE GIRL IN MY EYES
I DECIDE TO ADMIRE
DESE YOUTS I NEED TO INSPIRE
SAY IM HATER CUZ YOU’RE A LIAR
YOU CHAT SHIT LIKE STICKS AND CLIPS
COME TO THE BITZ SWITCH BLADE AND FLICK
NOT A SOFT BOY MAN IM HARD LIKE A PEBAL
DON’T SHOT GREEN TO DA TEAM LIKE A REBEL
DON’T PUSH WHITE LIKE A PUSH BIKE
SEE BLUE LIGHTS START PUSHING DA PEDALSMentally ive lost it now thts a cost of coke,
U wanna rob my phone then hope u can outrun a rope,
That slices ur neck when the noose round ur throat,
How u gonna spit lyrics when all u can do is choke,
So rewind back bitch hit a track then ill clap u,
The only midget i witness is u in a tracksuit,
Running round ur business saying how u chasing fast routes,
Please, ur chasing a train thts gone right past u
See i caught tht train coz my brain's lyrically balling,
U play catch up in ur car but its always stallin,
I put my all in, keep brawling, n ima never be calling,
Out peeps t battle when u cant handle it wen u falling.
so im sik wiv tha hits tha twist n blare
ur shit wiv tha bits tha dont compare
kick and share tht lyrics that flare
so quit chatin skils when therz no skills there
some call me dizzy other by ma name
wateva i do idont just ma fame
big in tha im big in tha game
They call me a lyrical time bomb
ratin me as they see me as an icon
never have time off always got time on
never get beat prove dat wen i rhyme on
run out of ink sumhow gotta rite on
rite with the lite off rite with the lite on
spit wida mic offf spit wida mic on
bars got width now gotta put height on
when i was yunga cudnt sleep widout lite on
i was scared of the dark
but now i'll tear u apart if man try 2 hype on
war wid me den wait till ur times gone
shoot a 16 at u den dats ur life gone
im hittin da mark ur rite off im rite on
bars so deep wonderin where the lites gone
everyday im pushin up know dat i fite on
Ill Merk Tempa, Tempa ive got a bad Temper.
Ima Badman for you, Blud dnt you Remember.
You aint a Contender, more like a Pretender.
Ur not Guyfolks, but ur be gone till November.
Ima big Spender. Dnt Jack my Barz Temp,
Im notta Lender. Im the Grime Clash Sender,
Ur Lyrics wont Defend ya. Id hit a little Harder
But I think ur too Tender. Dnt beef me cos
Ima true Eastender. Shottin on the Roads,
More Coke than a Vendor. Ur a likkle Bender.
I grab u by the Throat Temp, then I mite Bend ya.
Remind me of ur Gender! Bit confused so
Ill just call u Brenda. Im sendin again Bren
What is the Agenda?. Ur Swag and cnt Flow.
Show me ur Barz, and I can be the Mender.
Face it then Brenda, its time you Surrender.
And blast off rhymes, within a matter of time
I'm like a leader of organized crime
Destroy within a matter of time
Cuz im an mc that lives with grime
and Your a MC who get too hyped
From a ten word rhyme it took ya hours to type
That's not MCing, that’s just being
weak on his words and never thinkin bout freeing
the lyrical thoughts that I let come out
I'm The Genius of this, I know what it's about
UR A wack MC who claims to be better than
No way I'm frankly more clever than
all of you, each and every one, my son
Pay close attention
I take your brain to another dimension
Hold it, mold it, shape it
You got a knife, yes I wannaUve got 'bare' bars like nothing is in em,
Im religious to the streets, so i guess ur forgiven,
My rhythm is rhyme riddled, listen, im giving u some,
Hitting none, ur a joker, bitch ur as weak as they come,
U aint clashin many men, u aint packing lines,
Ur flashing men in pen hoping theyll suck ur sack dry,
Stop acting invincible, even Pac died,
Ur a pissed off cunt who will never get signed,
So huff n puff n keep spitting ur shit,
I'll leave u shitting bricks im bang on with a script,
Ur nothing but a newbie with his head in the clouds,
Come slew me u true G leave me dead on the ground,
Stop fucking around, k-Ryder ur a creep,
I lay u flat out in a permanent sleep
Im deep in the streets n faggot ive got the latest,
Ur faking the real thing, like a cock of latex.
rearrange it

[messenger]

i have been partying hard this weekend thats why i havent replied sooner,
i am 100 percent sure that those bars arnt urs or were written by some else for u, the reason i am sure is everything uve layed so far has been farely poor in my opinion, the contents been rubbish and the style is poor, u ryhme in a style i call 1 line rhyme .where u ryhme at the end of the sentance and thats it, my favourite style is 2 ryhme line where u ryhme twice in the middle and at the end, now if u were at a stage in ur writing where u had the ability to use the 2 line rhyme style u wouldnt switch to the shitter more amauter style, this isnt a snap decission i have gone through all ur bars with a fine tooth combe,
in terms of everything previous uv writ ide rate u 2 out of ten. and the last spit was a 7 out of ten, the writing style and the content is way diffrent too, i am sure that peice is not urs, although i could still out write and destroy those bars, i think uv cheated and should be dissqualified, theres no way u can go from shit too being okay, just like that and the diffrence between how weak everything u normaly do is to how that last piece was makes me sure u didnt write it,

[Shawn]

messenger, on Nov 30 2009, 03:31 PM, said:

i have been partying hard this weekend thats why i havent replied sooner,
i am 100 percent sure that those bars arnt urs or were written by some else for u, the reason i am sure is everything uve layed so far has been farely poor in my opinion, the contents been rubbish and the style is poor, u ryhme in a style i call 1 line rhyme .where u ryhme at the end of the sentance and thats it, my favourite style is 2 ryhme line where u ryhme twice in the middle and at the end, now if u were at a stage in ur writing where u had the ability to use the 2 line rhyme style u wouldnt switch to the shitter more amauter style, this isnt a snap decission i have gone through all ur bars with a fine tooth combe,
in terms of everything previous uv writ ide rate u 2 out of ten. and the last spit was a 7 out of ten, the writing style and the content is way diffrent too, i am sure that peice is not urs, although i could still out write and destroy those bars, i think uv cheated and should be dissqualified, theres no way u can go from shit too being okay, just like that and the diffrence between how weak everything u normaly do is to how that last piece was makes me sure u didnt write it,

cough
link
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[messenger]

if u would like i will post up some clear disstinctions between the two styles there so far apart its very clear to see, surely im not the only one too notice, daniels struggles to rhyme words longer than 5 letters and 2 cylibals normaly, look at the piece then reread and review his other pieces ull see

[Shawn]

My links were to posts at another place which his piece here quotes word for word.

[messenger]

thank you shawn. didnt realise mate. i knew it.

daniels u have stolen other peoples lirics. u have descraced urself, i would rather loose trying my best than to copy someone elses piece. u are pathetic, dont show ur liric biting ass on here anymore, i cannot believe someone could go that low, how u can even claim to be a emcee is a joke. i beat u 2-1 on votes anyway, u cheating mug. use my fucking lirics and ill have ur ass in court u prick.

dude surely for this he should be banned. surely.

i dont mean to sound harsh but this infuriates me. people like daniels make me never wanna post on any websites, because u dont know where its gonna end up. people like him are making the web a shiter place for websites like beatking surely. this has to result in a ban

This post has been edited by messenger: 01 December 2009 - 06:31 PM

[messenger]

i figured u out when i writ this to u .here take it again. enjoy u cheat.


im from the fucking school of we dont give a fuck,
middle fingers up,
ive got a bullet with daniels carved into it so listen up,
u spitting shit
a little bitch
ur spitings bit
out of lirics from other shit
but it still isnt worthy
u dont deserve me
its out now dont worry
hurry messengers figured it out now worry
i aint fucking worried bout this weak spitten
u pre written
ill keep giving u free edjucation
not too edjucate but too keep u hating

This post has been edited by messenger: 01 December 2009 - 07:10 PM

[Shawn]

He's not liable to be banned for it, because we ban very few.

His posts, if more come, will be examined by everyone who reads them now on though. In essence it wouldn't matter if he started posting truly excellent stuff because nobody would believe he didn't lift it from someone else.

The only point to the lyric battles here is respect from one's fellows. How much does he hold presently?